Dead Rising: Zombie's Unleashed

I know it not a LOST Fanfic but I'd like to see how it goes, if anyone likes the first chapter I wil lcontiue but if not I will not write anymore so here it is...

Chapter 1 – Awakening

As Sun arose, over the Sub-Urban town Penrith, on the mourning of February 2nd, the streets were empty, and quiet. A boy of 15 years old awoke in his Bed at 7 AM. His name was Kevin.
Kevin yawned, and groaned as it was time for him to return to school after this 6 week summer holidays. He got up out of Bed, with nothing but underpants on, and began to get ready for school.
By 7:30 AM Kevin was finished, and left his house for school. As soon as he stepped outside he knew something was wrong, there were no cars, noone walking around, and no sounds what so ever. Thou despite all this he continued to school, wondering continuously, “What is wrong?”
It was 7:50 by the time he got to school, and even the school playground had hardly anyone in it. At the stage he saw his 3 friends sitting down, talking. There names were, Jake who was Scottish with Red hair, Ashley, who was smaller than the rest of us, and the youngest, and Alex, who was the eldest by a month.
“Hey dude’s” said Kevin as he walked over to them. “Playground seems empty doesn’t it?” Kevin looked over the playground to see only 10 people.
“Yeah,” said Alex. “The buses haven’t come yet, so maybe that’s why.”
“Haven’t you seen the street? There empty Alex, there’s something the matter!”
“Come on Kevin,” said Jake, who never believed Kevin. “The streets are just empty, no big deal, there might be people on holidays still, I’ve heard there were some big traffic jams up North.”
Kevin then nodded as he sat down on the ground.

About 10 minutes had passed and the Playground was still empty, the 4 friends just sat there not talking.
“You don’t suppose we all came a day early?” asked Ashley jokingly.
Noone laughed or responded, but inside the School building a strange roaring, hissing noise echoed into the playground.
“What the hell was that?” asked Jake who stood up immediately.
The other 3 stood up for they heard it to, and what emerged from the door of the School main hallway was a teacher, who had been bitten by something on the left arm.
“Mr. Foster are you alright!?” asked Ashley who, he and Kevin had as a teacher for 3 months last year.
Mr., Foster opened his mouth to talk but all that came out was that roaring hissing noise again. Suddenly he started to shake, as his eye’s went all strange, and body changed to a pale white tone.
“What the hell is happening!?” screamed Alex who began to back away.
“Is that…?” asked Jake.
“A Zombie?” finished Kevin.

As Alex turned around he saw a bunch of people like Mr. Foster less that 10 meters away walking towards him.
“Guys!” yelled Alex as the 3 turned around to see what was wrong.
“Quickly!” yelled Kevin. “ Get up stairs to English Block, and into Computer Room 2.” The reason Kevin chose that Computer Room was because it had a big safe door with massive Lock on it, which no so called “Zombie could break through” as he an Jake had discussed, jokingly, a long time ago.
The 4 began running into the building and up the first set of stair’s to the Computer Room.
When they reached it, Ashley tried to open the door but it was locked, “Locked…the doors FREAKING locked!”
Kevin turned around and couldn’t see any Zombies, “I’ll just go round the corner to the English Staff Room, and grab some keys, Jake come with me..”
“Me!?” yelled Jake, not wanting to go.
“Yes you! Come on!”
The two went round the corner and entered the open English Staff Room, immediately seeing a Zombie in front of the two, Jake picked up a nearby chair and smacked the Zombie with it, causing the Zombie to break apart.
“Jake, you killed the Mr. Yakub Zombie,” said Kevin, Mr. Yakub was an English teacher from Fiji, he was a bad teacher who could not teach properly.
“He was a Zombie?” said Jake, quoting the Simpsons.
The two entered the Staff Room and Kevin spotted a Key rack almost immediately. He walked over to it searching for the key to the Computer room as he looked over to his right to see another Zombie.
“Jake?” asked Kevin.
“What? I’m outside!” yelled Jake.
“WHAT THE HELL! You’re supposed to be in here protecting me! There’s a zombie!”
Jake ran in realizing he stuffed up and picked up one of the English Teacher’s folders. He juggled around with it for abit, before throwing it at the Zombies head, causing it to fall backwards and out the 2nd story window.
“Anything else Kev? Asked Jake, thou Kevin had already left the room with the key. Jake then left too asking “Oh sure your allowed to leave?”
“Payback,” replied Kevin who opened the door to the Computer Room. “Alright everybody get in now.”
As everyone entered, Kevin shut, and locked the door. He put his arm against it and lowered his head wondering, “Where in hell do I go from here?”

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"I'll see you in another life brutha..." - Desmond

interesting, the storyline is good but i think you may have just into it and the zombies fall apart when you hit them, lol thats just funny, is this a horror or a comady?

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Horror/comedy based onr Dead Rising if you ever played it

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"I'll see you in another life brutha..." - Desmond

nope, any zombie based theme i write will always be based on the resident evil theme.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

ah mckay, well Im basing my Zombie thing on Dead Rising of course, and the reason for Zombies will be Dead Rising reason so yeah, it wil lall be new to you

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"I'll see you in another life brutha..." - Desmond

that it will but most of the reasons ten to be scientist trying to mess with life and end up creating a virus that can reanimate the body and bring the dead to life.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Welp yep! Thats basically it!

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"I'll see you in another life brutha..." - Desmond

Yeah, that's one way to describe all zombie stories in a single sentence!!!

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#5 Member of the 'League of X' elite board.

Or how about

Super Space Mutant Killer Zombies of Doom?

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"I'll see you in another life brutha..." - Desmond

Lol! You guys are all insane!

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*nods head rapidly with tounge flying about*

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"I'll see you in another life brutha..." - Desmond