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Episodes like "...In Translation" will be good for the non-extreme.
On the whole though blitz, I must say I'm loving your top-quality fanfics!

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i just feel so determined to write, i dont know how it happened but i sytarte and now it is a job, a quest to write every lost fanfic with Greg in it. i feel like locke trying to open the hatch.

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Lol!
I love writing! Infact i've asked to write a play by a local drama club (that i'm not even involved with!). So keep on writing blitz! You never know where you'll end up!

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Episode 19 “Deus Ex Machina”

Greg was just waking up from the best night sleep he had had sine the crash. He felt refreshed and ready for the day and it was then that he realised that he had company. He had an arm around him. He turned his head to the person and saw that it was Claire fast asleep. Greg smiled and kissed her forehead that made her groan and squirm before heading out of his tent and stretching.
“Good night sleep dude?” Hurley asks as he walks past,
“Sure, best I have had since we crashed,” Greg said smiling. Hurley peered into the tent and saw Claire lying on her side with her arm where Greg used to be.
“Ow I bet you did, dude,” Hurley said winking and continuing down the beach.
“We didn’t do anything Hurley if that’s what you mean,” Greg tried to explain. Greg then shut the tent and turned around and was shocked by the sudden appearance of Charlie.
“Have you seen Claire? She did come back to the caves last night,” Charlie said worried,
“Its ok Charlie she stayed with me last night, but don’t wake hr I think she is tired fro yesterday,” Greg said, Charlie looked disgusted and his face wrinkled up. He glared at Greg and then stormed off into the jungle.
“What a weird kid,” Greg thought to himself and then went off in search of breakfast.

Greg hated to leave Claire on her own but she was a big girl, she could look after herself, and there were some people there to make sure she was safe. Greg found fruit trees with some mangos in it. There were also banana trees and some apple trees too. Greg had to climb the tree and pick the ripe ones out. He didn’t want to knock them out because they might get bruised. Although Greg was a good climber he wasn’t the best and slipped whilst he was about 3 meters off the ground. He fell fats and landed on his back in a muddy puddle.
“Damn it!” Greg cursed and he rummaged thought the mud for his fruit but they were gone. Greg could do nothing else but climb back up the tree, that was much slipper thanks to the mud, and collect as much of the remains as possible.

Greg managed to collect 5 bananas, 3 apples and 7 mangos before he gave up and headed back to the beach.

Greg made his way into the tent where Claire was still asleep. He sat on the bed and took a bite into an apple just as Claire woke up.
“Morning Claire,” Greg said,
“Morning handsome,” Claire said edging forward to kiss Greg but backed away and said “You smell, you need a bath or something,”
“I am going for a swim once I have finished my apple,” Greg said taking another bite into the apple.
“How did you get so filthy?” Claire said looking at Greg’s mud soaked clothes,
“Fell….out of…..tree,” Greg said trying to eat as well as talk.
“You want me to get rid of those dirty clothes,” Claire said undoing the buttons of the shirt,
“Sure but you have to eat first, you are eating for two, so make sure you eat well.” Greg said kissing Claire and walking out of the tent. Greg then got undressed until he was completely naked and ran for the see.

Greg made sure he had a full view of the tent and was close enough to rush back there if anything happened as he bobbed up and down in the sea. He saw Chris rush off into the jungle which worried Greg. He liked to know what people were doing but didn’t like getting involved in other peoples business unless it involved him or Claire. Greg made a decision that he was going to follow Chris and so swam back to shore and head to his tent.

“Claire I hope you have eaten something,” Greg said from outside his tent. He opened the tent door and looked shocked when he could see Claire. Greg quickly put some pants on and a t-shirt and rushed outside shouting “Claire, Claire where are you!”
“Yeah, do you think you could shout a little louder I don’t think my aunt fanny in Mississippi quite heard ya!” Sawyer shouts back,
“Sawyer have you seen Claire?” Greg asks desperate,
“Yeah that wannabe rock star came and took her, she seemed quite glad to go with him now can you please stop talking before your accent drives me insane!” Sawyer shouts
“Ok I wont talk,” Greg said walking away Sawyer seemed to relax more but then Greg pulled out his left gun and fired into the air,
“You Son of a b***h you did that on purpose!” Sawyer shouts really annoyed but all Greg could do was laugh.

Greg eventually remembered that he was following Chris and raced off into the forest. Greg had no idea where Chris had gone but he had a feeling where. Chris would be looking for Locke, and Locke would be at the hatch. Greg didn’t know where the hatch was and had found it by accident the first time. One thing Chris couldn’t do was leave no tracks and his or someone’s footprints would lead Greg to the hatch.

Greg followed the muddy footprints intent on finding out what Chris was doing. Greg rushed through the forest having eyes for the footprints only. Eventually the footprints arrived at a clearing. Greg didn’t go into the clearing as he could her shouting. It was Chris alright, his Scottish accent boomed throughout the clearing. He was shouting at Locke who seemed very calm. Boone was packing some stuff.
“Why cant I come too, this hatch is my responsibility too?!” Chris shouts,
“Because we need someone to guard the hatch, we have already had Greg find it mysteriously, we don’t want anyone else to know about it,” Locke explains,
“Why don’t you get Boone to stay then, let me go?” Chris asks,
“No it ha to be Boone, the island wants it that way,” Locke said and he disappeared from Greg’s view. Greg knew he had to find out what was going on now so he stepped out from the bushes and said,
“Mysteriously appeared eh, seems like you don’t know how I found the hatch the first time,” Greg said chuckling,
“What, how come you found it again?” Locke said turning around and seeing Greg, he had the exact same expression on his face as he did the last time.
“I followed the tracks only they weren’t boar tracks this time,” Greg said looking at Chris,
“Have you told anyone?” Locke asks,
“Ow was I meant to?” Greg chuckles,
“NO, no you weren’t but Chris seems to know about it,” Locke said expecting an answer from Greg,
“Hey, I’ll be asking the questions here mate, like how did you know I was talking about the hatch Chris, when I saw you catching boar?” Greg asks,
“Locke saw me talking to you and thought you had told me, he told me everything and it turns out I didn’t know anything in the first place,” Chris said, Locke looked down in shame,
“Well now I know where you have been scurrying off to I can rest easy,” Greg said turning around to head back to camp.
“What so you came here just to find out where I had been going?” Chris asks,
“Yep, I want to make sure I know where everyone is in future. I life or death situations you will thank me for knowing where you are?” Greg said heading in the direction of the beach,
“WAIT!” Chris shouts and Greg stops, “I will come with you, there is nothing more here I can do,” Chris said rushing by Greg’s side,
“What about the hatch?” Greg asks hinting Locke’s words,
“I have more important things to worry about,” Chris said. Greg smiled at Chris’s words and they headed back to the beach.

Once they arrived at the beach and spots Jack making a house call at Sawyers tent. Greg decides to check things out at Sawyers tent whilst Chris goes to collect some more water from the caves.
“Have you managed to sort his headache out yet doc? He’s been grouchy all day because of it,”! Greg asks smiling at Sawyer,
“Says the crazy b*****d that makes more noise than the entire beach put together!” Sawyer shouts,
“Just clam down Sawyer, I need you o tell me if this is better or worse,” Jack says writing something on his notepad,
“Worse,” Sawyer snaps, Jack reaches into a box of dead people’s glasses and Greg can’t help chuckle at the thought. Jack pulls out some very 70’s glasses and hands then to Sawyer,
“No way doc,” Sawyer says pushing the glasses away from him.
“This isn’t a fashion show Sawyer,” Jack says looking at Sawyer intently and waving the glasses in front of him.
“Fine!” Sawyer shouts and puts the glasses on.
“Try read that,” Jack says trying to hold his laughter in whilst Sawyer looks at the notepad. Sawyer reads the message “Better or worse” on the notepad,
“Ow ha, ha, ha, very funny doc,” Sawyer says passing the notepad back to Jack. Hurley walks past and cant help but stare at Sawyer and his new glasses, and comment on them.
“Dude it looks like someone’s steam-rolled Harry potter,” Hurley says, Kate bursts out in laughter as does Greg and Jack chuckles.
“Your loving this aren’t you?” Sawyer says,
“Yep every second of it,” Greg chuckles and heads back to his tent.

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Whoa, you're on roll blitz! I haven't got much time right now, so I'll need to read the two new instalments tonight! I can't wait!!!

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I am not done yet, do no harm is comming shortly, and its a good episode.

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They're all good episodes!!!

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i know but this one is espectally for the new charicter, this one is special.

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Episode 20 “Do no harm,”

Greg was sitting on the beach reading his book whilst watching the raft being built. Greg sees Claire walk past and head towards the raft. She looked tired and not her usual perky self,
“Are you ok Claire?” Greg says standing up and walking towards her,
“Fine, why?” She asks back,
“It’s just that you don’t seem yourself today Claire, is everything alright with you and Charlie?” Greg said, Claire looked at Greg hoping he didn’t mean what she thought he meant,
“Charlie is a nice guy, we get along, but not as well as we do,” she said, Greg felt kind of embarrassed for saying what he had said,
“I didn’t mean that, I am sorry if it came out wrong,” Greg explains
“Well I am fine,” Claire said continuing to walk to the raft.
“If you say so,” Greg says watching her walk to the raft and then continues to read his book.

Greg had finished a chapter of his book when Chris ran down the beach towards him. He didn’t shout, he just waved his arms frantically at Greg.
“What is it Chris?” Greg asks Chris as he reached Greg, Chris gasped for air from running and then took a deep breathe and said,
“Katharine….has just….told me……that…..Locke and Boone….are back,” Chris panted,
“And……” Greg said looking for the importance of the event,
“Boone….looks like…..he has fallen off a…..Cliff,” Chris said composing himself. Greg jumped up and said,
“Ok you stay here and catch your breathe, I will go an see if I can help out,” Greg said racing off into the jungle.

Greg pounded through the jungle and neck bursting speed trying to get to the caves to see if Boone was alright. Greg didn’t know the kid well but if Boone had fallen down a cliff he would be critical and would need all the help he could get. Greg also wanted to interrogate Locke whilst he was still at the caves.

Greg burst into the caves and had a huge rush of déjà vu as he saw a huge crowd of people standing around the infirmary. Greg walked towards the bed where he would find Boone and forced his way through the crowd.
“What’s happened? Where’s Locke?” Greg asks but Jack didn’t answer nor stopped what he was doing,
“Jack is trying o save Boones life, you should go and let him work,” Katharine says pushing Greg back out of the crowd,
“I want to know what Locke ha done to him; you have to tell me where he is?” Greg said angrily looking over Katharine’s shoulder at Boone.
“We don’t know where he is, he just, vanished,” Katharine says,
“Doesn’t sound like the actions of a friend do it,” Greg said getting more and more suspicious of Locke.
“Look just takes your conspiracies somewhere else Greg, Jack is trying to save a life and you are acting like it is a murder case!” Katharine shouts,
“That might just be what it is Katharine,” Greg said then he turned around and headed back to the beach.

Greg met Chris on the way who was rushing to see Boone.
“Is Boone alright?” Chris gasped as he took deep breathes,
“He’s fine,” Greg said knowing too well that that was a lie.
“What about Locke?” Chris asks, Greg thought for a while and then answered,
“I don’t know,” and then he continued back t the beach,
“What do you mean you don t know?” Chris shouts,
“Why dint you go see for yourself Chris, of course you will have to find Jonny Locke because he has done a disappearing act and vanished somewhere!” Greg shouts back and he continues back to the beach.

Greg is walking back to the beach when he hears someone shouting for help. Greg naturally rushes to the sound of the shouts and finally bursts out of the forest into a clearing where he sees Kate and Claire, Claire looks in a lot of pain and Kate looks scared.
“What’s wrong Claire?” Greg asks
“Greg there’s no time to explain, Claire is having the baby, we need you to go get Jack immediately,” Kate says trying to calm Claire down,
“No, I want to be here with Claire, why don’t you go and get Jack?” Greg asks walking towards Claire,
“What, Greg we don’t have time to argue about this ok Claire is having the baby,” Kate says stressed and scared,
“Jack is busy he doesn’t want to be disturbed,” Greg says putting an arm around Claire and stroking her hair.
“Well he it can’t be as important as this he needs to be here,” Kate says. Suddenly Jin bursts out into the clearing and looks around, he sees Kate, Greg and a very distressed Claire and his eyes widen and he looks in shock,
“Jin, you have to go get Jack, Go get Jack!” Kate shouts,
“Jack, doctor,” Jin says,
“Yes, yes Jack the doctor hurry Jin!” Kate shouts and Jin rushes back into the forest. Claire groans in pain and hold her stomach,
“Its ok Claire, I am here and Jack is coming,” Greg says,
“What are we going to do Greg?” Kate says panicking,
“We half to calm her down, she will just make it worse if she is stressed like this,” Greg said ripping off one of his shirts sleeves and pouring the water in his bottle onto it.
“What are you doing?” Kate asks,
“Trying to cool her down,” Greg says putting the wet Sleeve over Claire forehead and dabbed it on her forehead and round her face,
“Claire, Claire, its going to be ok,” Greg says looking at Kate who is sweating and hoping Jack would arrive soon.

Night falls over the forest and Greg has been cuddling Claire and trying to keep her calm for hours now. Kate has been pacing up and down waiting for Jack to arrive. Claire Looks down at her swollen stomach and says,
“I think they have stopped,”
“Is that supposed to happen?” Greg asks looking at Kate,
“I think it happens,” Kate answers back,
“No, no, no, no, There not coming anymore, I am fine, I’m OK,” Claire says standing up,
“Claire….” Kate says standing up as well,
“Claire sit back down, this is supposed to happen, you are still having this baby,” Greg says standing up and putting a hand on Claire’s shoulder,
“No, no, no, I’m ok really,” Claire says smiling,
“Claire I don’t think you should be doing…..” Kate starts but is cut off by a trickling noise.
“What was that?” Claire asks her smile disappearing and is replaced by a look of fear,
“I think your waters just broke,” Kate says really shocked,
“Claire, you’re having the baby,” Greg said just as shocked as Kate.
“No, no, no I cant have the baby now,” Claire says scared,
“Jut hold on Claire,” Kate says trying to compose herself,
“I can’t have the baby now!” Claire shouts,
“Claire there is nothing to be scared of ok,” Greg says,
“I am not scared, I am not scared,” Claire says obviously petrified,
“Come here Claire,” Greg says opening his arms and folding then around her.
“I don’t want the baby now,” Claire says tears start to roll down her face,
“I have always wanted this baby Claire, it doesn’t matter if it’s here or in some hospital, I will always want it and I know you want it too,” Greg said rocking Claire backwards and forwards to calm her down.
“Jack is coming Claire, he is coming,” Kate said trying to reassure herself rather than calm Claire down.

Charlie and Jin arrive to see Claire is bent double and ready to give birth. Greg is by her side stroking her head and whispering stuff to her. When Kate sees then she stands up and asks,
“Where’s Jack?”
“He couldn’t come,” Charlie answers looking at Claire
“Its hurts so much,” Claire says gasping for air as her face turns red with pain.
“What do you mean he couldn’t come? He has to…” Kate says now really stressed and scared
“He’s pouring his own blood into Boone’s arm right now.” Charlie explains
“OK. OK, we’ll just have to pick her up and bring her to him.” Kate says walking over to Claire.
“No, Kate,” Charlie says,
“No we have to take her to him before it’s too late!” Kate shouts,
“Look here, Jack said you have to deliver the baby,” Charlie said,
“What?” Kate shouted trying to get a hold of what Charlie had just said.
“Now he talked me through it, it’s relatively simple,” Charlie said,
“I can’t deliver this baby,” Kate said,
“Greg I am Scared, it hurts so bad, please, you have o do something,” Claire says to Greg trying to fight off the pain, Jin says something in Korean and it sound like he is scared and wants to do something but doesn’t know what to do.
“Ok Claire, I want you to grab and hold my hand, just like before,” Greg says holding his hand out to Claire,
“What, no not after last time,” Claire said refusing to hold it,
“Claire I will not have you suffer like this without me doing anything to help,” Greg said,
“No I could hurt you even more with the real thing, don’t want to hurt you,” Claire said,
“Claire grabs my hand now, it’s the only way the pain will go away, I want you to, I am begging you to grab my hand and not let go until our baby is in this world!” Greg shouts,
“No I wo……” Claire starts but a big rush of pain forces her to grab the hand.
“Now when ever you feel the need to squeeze you just squeeze, forget about it being my hand, just squeeze\it,” Greg says and he kiss’s her forehead before looking up at Kate and Charlie who are still arguing over delivering the baby.
“Kate just deliver my son now!” Greg shouts to her,
“Why don’t you do it?” Kate shouts back,
“Because I am busy trying to stop Claire from dieing whilst you two are arguing who is going to deliver the baby!” Greg shouts. Kate stares at Greg’s face as he winces as Claire squeezes his hand and she looks at Claire who looks in dire pain.
“Ok, don’t worry Claire, we will get through this together, everything I going to be ok.” Kate says slightly scared but ready to deliver the baby.
“Ok Claire I need you to start to push ok,” Kate says but Claire has no intention of pushing and holds her breathe,
“Claire what are you doing, stop you have to start pushing Claire,” Kate says but Claire continues to hold her breathe.
“Claire, there is no need to be scared ok, I am here, I will look after you and Kate will help deliver the baby but you have to start to push it out now,” Greg says,
“The baby wont like me, I know it won’t. It will know that I didn’t want it and wanted to give it away, babies know that stuff,” Claire says,
“Claire, I wan this baby, this is our baby, it wont care if you wanted to give it away, as long as you want it know then it will understand.” Greg explains,
“He’s right Claire, this is our baby, it belongs in this world but you have to start pushing honey. You want it to be healthy don’t you?” Kate asks and Claire nods, “Right then start to push!” Kate shouts.

After hours of hard labour Claire is almost at the end, the baby is almost free and Kate is Greg is excited at a dad that he totally ignores his blooded hand and says stuff to Claire to help her.
“Relax, relax, relax, and relax. Breathe. Come on. Breathe. Breathe. OK. Good. OK, ready? You’ve gotta do a nice one. I can see its close. Go, go, go, go. Push!” Kate shouts and Claire starts to push,
“Come on Claire you can do this, you are almost there!” Greg shouts to encourage Claire
“That’s really good. I think its close. Come on. That’s it. OK. Good, good, good. I can see it. I can see the top of its head. You’re almost there. Come on. I can see it. I can see it. OK. You’re almost there. You’re so close. You’re so close. Ready? Ready? Come on. One more. Go! Push! Push! Push! Push! Push! Push!” Kate screams and Claire pushes hard and screams in agony. Greg sees the baby come out and rest in Kate’s arms. Claire leans back down and rests, letting Greg hands loose.
“Oh, my God, you have a little boy. A little baby boy,” Kate says and hold out the baby for Claire to see,
“Oh, come here,” Claire says holding out her arms. Kate passes Greg the baby and Greg looks down at his son for a short while before he passes him to Claire.
“That’s you baby boy,” Kate says to Greg,
“I have a son,” Greg says looking at Claire and his son.
“We have a son,” Claire says grabbing Greg’s shirt and pulling him closer so he can see the baby. Jin and Charlie move closer too and they look at each other. Jin puts a hand out for Charlie to shake but Charlie jumps on Jin and they dance around.
“Well done Claire well done,” Greg says kissing Claire on the lips and putting his fingers out to his son to feel and get to know.

The next morning, Greg, Kate, Charlie, Jin and Claire, holding her baby wrapped in a towel, walk down to the beach camp. The other survivors gather round to see the new arrival. Walt looks at the baby, smiling, as does Hurley. Even Sawyer has an expression of joy on his face. Jack, a bandage tied around his arm to cover the hole from the transfusion, looks down at Claire’s baby, half-smiling. Kate looks at Claire, who kisses her baby on the forehead. Claire passes Greg his son and Greg is delighted to show the survivors the new arrival.

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These are all amazing, blitz! You continue to outdo yourself!!!!!

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thanks sawbucks, its been a rough day but i am glad that i can always count on you to cheer me up with your comments.

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Read the sig! Wink

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lol thats easyer than actually poting it.

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Episode 21 “The greater good”

Greg was outside his tent reading his book and rocking the baby in its new cradle rapped in the new blanket. Greg had been awake most of the night taking care of the baby. He didn’t want Claire to have to wake up and deal with him because she had not relaxed since she gave birth to him. Greg heard the baby stir so he put his book down and lent over the cradle.
“Shhhh, its ok little one, daddies here just go back to sleep,” Greg said but the baby was now fully awake and didn’t want a second longer in his crib. He started to cry a bit not knowing what to do. “Its ok, look you want to get out, ok let’s get you out of that crib,” Greg said reaching in and picking up his son. The baby seemed a bit happier to get out of the crib but wanted something else and so started to cry again. “No, no, no please don’t cry,” Greg said trying to rock the baby back to sleep but he wasn’t going to, not until he had what he wanted.
“What’s wrong?” Claire groaned as she stepped out of the tent,
“I think he hungry and unless he likes mango’s its something I cant provide for him,” Greg said holding the baby out to Claire. Claire got hold of the baby who seemed happier to be with Claire partly because she was the only one who could give him what he wanted.
“You seem tired, I hope he didn’t keep you awake,” Claire said as she headed back into the tent,
“No he was fine, I didn’t want him waking you up so I stayed by him and comforted him until he was fast asleep,” Greg said stretching,
“Thank you but I am awake now I can look after him now,” Claire said from inside the tent.
“Ok but don’t push yourself, you have just given birth to the little one, I don’t want you to collapse of exhaustion or anything like that,” Greg said and he decided to take a walk whilst Claire looked after the baby.

Greg was walking along the beach when he saw Charlie running down the beach towards the camp.
“Hi Charlie, you couldn’t do me a favour could you?” Greg asks,
“Let me think, no,” Charlie said still angry at Greg,
“You don’t even know what it is yet,” Greg said smiling at Charlie’s sour sense of humour,
“Any favour from you always involves something that is going to get some else killed or hated by Claire,” Charlie said continuing down the beach,
“Ok I guess you don’t want to help Claire then,” Greg said turning around and continuing walking the way he was.
“Wait, what is it she need’s help with?” Charlie said turning around to Greg,
“\I am worried that she is doing too much for the baby by herself, I need someone to take care of him whilst Claire has a rest,” Greg explains,
“Why don’t you do it yourself? You are the father of the baby; you should be there for it,” Charlie asks,
“I am kind of busy, I think Locke may have murdered Boone so I need to find him before Jack does,” Greg said,
“So why me? Aren’t I the last person you would want to be looking after your son?” Charlie asks and Greg smiles and says,
“Trust Charlie has to be earned, Claire seems to trust you and I think its time I started to trust you too,” Greg said, Charlie was stunned by Greg’s words, he kept thinking to himself
“Did Greg just say he trusts me?” well Charlie knew not to fall for Greg’s tricks but he felt that it was time to end the friction between them and anyway if it meant he could get closer to Claire then Charlie would be happy,
“Sure I can put all of that stuff behind us,” Charlie said putting a hand out for Greg. Greg looks at the hand and smiles,
“On one condition, you have to give up your crush on her, you have to live with the fact that she is with me and we have a baby now. So no more sour grapes and I promise that I will help you when you need it but only if you keep your hands to yourself and don’t try and pull anything over on me,” Greg said shaking the hand.
“I knew there was a catch,” Charlie thought but he didn’t care, he not only had Greg as a friend now but he also got to be with Claire but he had to promise he would not do anything and that was something he knew would be the hardest thing to promise.
“Good then we are agreed, you may go and see Claire, now, tell her that the bad blood is over between us and you want to be friends with her, and nothing more,” Greg said
“Sure whatever,” Charlie said walking to the camp and towards Claire’s tent.

Greg continued down the beach and saw Chris carrying a sack of fruit back to his tent.
“Hi Chris!” Greg shouted waving at the Scotsman,
“Good morning, how’s family life treating you?” Chris asks, Greg pauses trying to find a word for tiring and exciting.
“Its worth it, it gets really tiring when you are trying to sleep but when I take him outside and we look at the moon I feel like a true father instead of the guy who accidentally got Claire pregnant,” Greg explains,
“Well I am glad you are enjoying it, but why you aren’t with him now, he needs a father figure in his life and I think you will make a great one,” Chris said,
“Thanks Chris but I let Charlie go and help Claire out. It seems she is a bit obsessed with the whole mother thing and I am worried that she is going to tire herself out. She won’t even let me look after him unless she was there with me,” Greg explains,
“What you are going to let Charlie be the father figure?” Chris asks worried,
“No, but Charlie is good at persuading Claire to do stuff and he will most defiantly get her to rest. And anyway I am busy.” Greg said walking past Chris,
“Busy doing what?” Chris said turning around to see Greg’s back.
“Trying to find Locke, I think he may know more than he is letting on about Boones fall,” Greg said continuing along the beach,
“WAIT! I will go look for him, you have to go and loo after your son. Don’t let Charlie be the father figure in that babies life. You have to be there for Claire and the baby, prove to her that you can look after your son and make her confident that she can trust you to keep him safe,” Chris advise Greg,
“Your right, she need’s to learn to trust me with him. He is safer with me than he is anywhere else. Thanks for the advice,” Greg said turning around and rushing off back to the camp.
Greg was walking down the beach towards his tent when he heard a man singing “I feel good” way off key and rather badly. Greg followed the singing and it was soon joined by crying, Greg then realised who it was.
“Charlie, can I have a word?” Greg asks,
“Sure what do you want?” Charlie asks back,
“Could I look after the baby for a while?” Greg answers; Charlie without hesitation practically threw the baby into Greg’s arms and followed Hurley to play some golf. Greg stood there for about a minute trying to figure out why Charlie had just given him the baby without arguing back or asking why.
“Must be because of that talk we had,” Greg thought as he cradled his son in his arms.

After 30 minutes of non-stop crying from the baby Greg slowly realised why he had been given the baby as fast as Charlie did.
“Shhhhh, its ok, calm down little one, its ok, please stop crying,” Greg said trying to hush the baby but there was nothing he could do. Then an idea popped into his head but he would need Charlie’s guitar.

Greg carried the baby through the jungle with him screaming his head off. He finally reached the golf course where Hurley and Charlie were having a game.
“Charlie!” Greg shouts, Charlie looks around and sees Greg, as soon as he does he shakes his head and says,
“No way, you wanted him now you have to suffer!”
“I don’t want to give him back I want to borrow your guitar!” Greg shouts,
“No way, my guitar is my baby, you get turnip head and I get the guitar!” Charlie shouts back,
“Ow come on, I will teach you a new song that is bound to get the baby of a Littleton to sleep!” Greg shouts, Charlie ponders on it for a while and then says,
“I shall get the guitar; you have to wash your hands before using it and none of that heavy metal stuff that will break my strings,”
“Don’t worry, it’s a nursery rhyme!” Greg shouts
“But I tried all of the nursery rhymes!” Charlie shouts,
“I bet you haven’t done this one,” Greg says and he lets Charlie lead the way back to the beach.

Back on the beach Greg was cooing the baby whilst Charlie went to get his guitar. Greg had made the mistake of doing it by Sawyers tent, and Sawyer like always wasn’t too happy,
“Hey Daddy day care, do you mind getting that kind to shut up!” Sawyer shouts
“Gosh I am sorry Sawyer; sorry you’re such a grumpy, old, worm. Say Sawyer aren’t you a……” Greg starts,
“If you finish that sentence I will rip out your tongue and use it as a bookmark,” Sawyer said as the baby stopped crying.
“Well now, after hours of screaming bloody murder and crying puddles of tears you have finally……” Greg said stopping mid sentence by the screams of his son,
“You were saying daddy no paws,” Sawyer said and again the baby stopped crying,
“Ow my god, Sawyer you have the power to make children stop crying,” Greg said smiling,
“Yeah too bad it doesn’t work on annoying Aussies,” Sawyer said. Suddenly Charlie appeared with his guitar in its case and place it down in front of Greg.
“There you are, now what?” Charlie asks,
“Now you take my son and you get Sawyer to read his magazine out load whilst I see how Claire is doing,” Greg said and he rushed off leaving Charlie with the baby and Sawyer reading aloud.

Greg entered his tent and saw Claire was awake.
“Afternoon Claire, did you have a good sleep?” Greg asks,
“It was the best I have had in ages, nothing moving around inside me, no distractions,” Claire answers,
“Great I am glad you are awake because I have a surprise for you,” Greg said helping Claire out of her bed and leading her to Sawyers tent.

Once they arrived at Sawyers tent Claire was amaze to see Sawyer reading from a car magazine and her son not crying.
“Wow this is amazing,” Claire said amazed,
“You have seen nothing yet Claire, your favourite nursery rhyme is ‘Catch a falling star’ isn’t it?” Greg asks, Claire nods wondering what to expect, Greg picked up Charlie’s guitar and got it comfortable and then started playing ‘Catch a falling star’
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket
Never let it fade away
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket
Save it for a rainy day
For love may come and tap you on the shoulder
Some starless night
Just in case you feel you wanna hold her
You’ll have a pocketful of starlight
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket
Never let it fade away
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket
Save it for a rainy day
For love may come and tap you on the shoulder
Some starless night
And just in case you feel you wanna hold her
You’ll have a pocketful of starlight
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket
Never let it fade away
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket
Save it for a rainy day
For when your troubles start multiplyin’
And they just might
It’s easy to forget them without tryin’
With just a pocketful of starlight
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket
Never let it fade away
Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket
Save it for a rainy day
Save it for a rainy day
The baby was fast asleep by the end and everyone had sung along once they recognised the lyrics. Claire was so happy that Greg had surprised her with the song and even Sawyer was happy to join in and be part of the group for once.

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Another brilliant fanfic Blitz!
Well done! Very Happy

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thanks,

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Yeah, that was amazing!!! "The Greater Good" is one of my favourite (If not THE favourite) episodes, and you have done it justice!!! NICE ONE!!!!!!!!!!

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thanks you guys, i am currently working on born to run, lol i know finger blistering pace but i really want to start seaon 2 episodes but i will make sure that the good quality you have all grown to love will not be lost.

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Lol, well, I trust you to maintain your quality! I'm afraid to say that soon you will have to go on without my transcripts, 'cos I'm still on "...And Found" just now! It's annoying! I've written half of that, and half of my next fanfic...Why can't I finish one before I start the other, lol!!!!

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just got round to reading your fanfics. WOW! i am blown away!

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He is the master, isn't he? All hail blitz!!!

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*Gets on knees and starts to bow* Blitz....Blitz....Blitz

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Lol, you're almost as mad a hatter as me!!!!!

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tell me about it!

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OK, I will!

You are as crazy as a colour-blind, schizophrenic, paranoid, arachnophobic, hypocondriatic, telepathic, psychopathic, hyper-active, dehydrated pink rhinoceros from Brazil who has a bad case of athlete's foot and eats nothing but orange Starbursts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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you guys are mental, i will have born to run up some time today when i can get through all of these posts but i am afraid that when i go back to sixth form i will be short on time.

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No worries Blitz!

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No worries Blitz!

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Yeah, don't feel you need to rush them or anything! Take your time!

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Episode 22 “Born to run,”

Greg was fast asleep; he was just so tired not just from the baby waking him up but the freak rain storms that went on last night really didn’t help. Claire sat over Greg combing her had through his hair. Greg stirred and he slowly opened his eyes to see Claire looking down on him. Greg squinted at Claire like there was a bright light shining in his eyes.
“Are you ok?” Claire asks,
“I’m fine, just got a bit of a headache,” Greg groaned sitting up too fast which lead to his headache getting worse.
“I guess I will have to stay here and look after you then,” Claire says surprisingly excited as she stroked Greg’s head.
“I have some stuff to do so I won’t be staying,” Greg said standing up and wobbling. He felt quite dizzy but he did let it stop him from walking out of the tent.

Once outside Greg noticed how noisy everything was. There was this one guy who was shouting at Michael about something. It looked like one of Chris’s friends Lesley, Lesley Arzt. Greg just wanted him to shut up otherwise he would end up shooting him. So instead of pulling out his guns and shooting several holes in Arzt he decided to ask what the problem was.
“Hey Lesley!” Greg shouts,
“It’s Arzt,” Arzt said back,
“What is the problem; maybe I can sort it before my head explodes?” Greg asks
“Well I was explaining to Michael that it’s been raining every afternoon. That means that we are on the cusp of monsoon season. Monsoon season is bad. Now, the trade winds are blowing north right now. Shipping lanes are north. So north is exactly where he wants to be.” Arzt explains
“And…….” Greg said forcing Arzt to carry on,
“It means, when the monsoon season hits, the trade winds are gonna shift to the south. The raft goes with the wind. Can anyone tell me what is the only piece of land south of us?” Arzt asks
“Antarctica,” Jack says fairly confident,
“That’s right, Jack. Antarctica,” Arzt said as if he was teaching one of his classes.
“So when do we have to leave?” Michael asks,
“Yesterday,” Arzt said,
“So why are we having this conversation?” Greg asks getting fed up of the useless conversation.
“Because they were going to just go out there and eventually reach the one place in the world they wouldn’t want to be,” Arzt explains,
“I think here is worse than anywhere else in the world because at least if I am in Antarctica I can kill everything. Do you believe in monsters Arzt?” Greg asks,
“No why?” Arzt asks back,
“Because we are sharing this island with one, and the worse thing is, I can’t kill it,” Greg says staring at Arzt for a while before turning around quickly and marching off into the jungle.
“Where are you going Greg?” Claire shouts as he marches past her,
“I’m going for a walk!” Greg shouts back and disappears into the jungle.

Claire watched as Greg disappeared into the jungle. She spotted Chris walking towards the raft to see what the commotion was about.
“Chris!” Claire shouts waving at Chris, Chris waves back but Claire then signals for him to come to her so he rushes over.
“What’s up Claire?” Chris asks Claire’s hands start to shake with fear that something will happen to Greg. Chris holds her hands steady and looks into her eyes. “Claire what’s wrong, what has he done?” Chris asks. Claire starts to cry and sobs,
“Please you have to help him,”
“Help who, Greg? Why? What’s happened?” Chris asks getting worried now.
“He is ill h-he went off into the jungle and I am scared that something will happen to him,” Claire cries. Chris cuddles Claire and says,
“It’s ok Claire, its ok, I shall help look for him,” Chris says enjoying the heart to heart with Claire.
“Thank you Chris,” Claire said holding Chris until he forced her off so he could chase after Greg.

Chris rushed through the forest in search of Greg. He saw someone bending forwards behind a tree. They were throwing up as if they had had a serious amount of alcohol and Chris knew who it was.
“Greg!” Chris shouted running up to Greg as he whipped his mouth and turned to face Chris.
“What do you want?” Greg asks
“Claire sent me to check up on you, you don’t seem too good, maybe you should head back,” Chris advised,
“What so you’re a doctor now!” Greg said sarcastically before heading back to the beach.
“Let me help you Greg,” Chris said chasing after Greg,
“I don’t need your help I’m fine,” Greg said starting to run to the beach. Suddenly Greg felt really dizzy and tripped over a tree root. He fell towards the ground but was caught by Chris.
“Its ok I’ve got you,” Chris said helping Greg up and walking him to the beach.

Chris and Greg arrived at the beach. Greg felt a bit better but didn’t want Chris’s help.
“I’m fine Chris just back off!” Greg shouts elbowing Chris in the stomach and walking away. The heat was unbearable and Greg felt another dizzy spell coming on. The beach started spinning and Greg found it hard to keep his balance. He could hear faint voices but then he hit the ground and everything went black.

Greg could hear voices of two people talking about something
“What wrong Jack, is he going to be ok?” A women asks,
“He is going to be fine, it’s normal to get al little sick when….” Jack started noticing Greg’s eyes slowly opening.
“Hello there Greg, do you know where you are?” Jack asks,
“I don’t think any of us know where we are but if had to hazard a guess it’s on an island,” Greg said mockingly,
“No I meant do you know where you are on the island?” Jack asks, Greg sits up and looks around.
“The caves?” Greg asks,
“You cheated,” Claire says kneeling down to his height. “How are you feeling?”
“Like I have just woken up from the floor of a bar I don’t remember drinking in and feeling like I have had way too much to drink,” Greg says,
“Well it’s not uncommon that your brain matches your symptoms with having a hangover.” Jack explains,
“What so I was drunk?” Greg asks,
“No, because you haven’t felt like this before except from when you have woken up with a hangover naturally our brain says that’s what has happened to you.” Jack explains further.
“So why did I feel so ill Jack?” Greg asks
“Well you may have spent too much time in the sun and you were pushing yourself too hard to help others, you should spend more time looking after yourself and have you been eating enough?” Jack asks,
“Fruit in the day, fish or boar in the evening and maybe some more fruit in between why?” Greg asks back,
“Because that may contribute to your illness but that seems fine. Have you been drinking enough water?” Jack asks,
“A bottle a day keeps the doctor away,” Greg chuckles, Jack smiles back and stands up.
“You should be fine if you stay in the shade and relax a little,” Jack says,
“Thanks, ow and Jack, why did you bring me to the caves? The beach was closer,” Greg asks,
“Why are you so scared of the caves, what are you running from?” Jack asks,
“These caves have too many bad memories in them. And why don’t you talk to Kate about running, 2 months I was chasing her for, always on the road stopping in hotels and night inns. I would almost have her and then she would slip through my fingers.” Greg said,
“Ok well its cooler up here so you should spend more time here than down on the beach,” Jack said walking away,
“I’ll think about it doc!” Greg shouts as Jack disappears out of sight.
“I thought you were going to die,” Claire said, Greg turns around to meet the ice blue eyes of Claire.
“I am strong, I can take it on the chin Claire,” Greg said back, Claire hugs Greg and then says,
“Why didn’t you want me to look after you?” Claire asks,
“Because I didn’t want you to sit by my side all day when you could be doing other things,” Greg explains,
“All those times you looked after me when I got ill, you said it felt good taking care of someone you cared about. Yet when I was willing to look after you you would always say that you were fine and struggle on with something. All those times you aid you were fine, were you saying them because you didn’t want to make a fuss, or because you didn’t want me to look after you?” Claire asks looking deep into the chocolate brown eyes of Greg.
“Neither, I didn’t want to let you down Claire; I said I would be there for you. I didn’t want you to think I was weak and I didn’t want you to think I couldn’t take care of you because I couldn’t take care of myself,” Greg said his chocolate brown eyes watering as tears formed in them.
“I wouldn’t have thought you were weak, I would have looked after you like you looked after me. I love you Greg and I never want to see you like this again, I want to help you get better before it gets worse.” Claire said her Ice blue eyes melting and the water running down her soft cheek. Greg whipped the tear away and there lips got closer to each other until eventually they met and they kissed.

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That, once again, was awesome blitz!!! I was hoping Chris was gonna sneak in with Claire, but oh well...Anyway, I can't wait to read your version of the finale!!!!!!!

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The fanalie will be good but there are two roads and i want Greg to follow them both. unless i get Chris to follow one whilst Greg follows the other, ah yes pure genius. anyway i had trouble writing the storyline to that one, no reall scenes with Claire in, no real action so i though heck lets make Greg ill so i did but idont know, i dont think i quite got it with that one.

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I enjoyed it all the same, blitz!!! And, as I said, I can't wait for the finale!

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Thanks but since its a three parter it will come on three parts.

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That makes sense, even to me!!! Wink

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Big bumper finale! Cant wait to read it!

I'll bug you at 6th form for it!

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Yes, don't give him a moment's peace until he's got it done!!!

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I never give him a moments peace anyway. I really do bug him and he knows it

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not if i get it done before i see ou tomorow, wait, wouldnt that be playing right into your hand, meh

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what to do, what to do? oh well we will soon find out won't we! can't wait![/list]

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Lol, yes, whenever you get it done, blitz, you know I will be here to read it!!!

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We are eager beavers for you fanfics! *Nibble Nibble* Mmmm! Tasty!

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Lol, you are one weird beaver! Though the whole "tree" thing is starting to make sense now...

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it will never make sense to most people. But I guess you are not most people are you. Come on then! Explain the 'tree'.

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It was just the beaver-tree connection, that's all. I will probably never understand the crazy, crazy reasoning behind it all.

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Nah! There is no connection to it all. Blitz might be able to tell you though..

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Isn't it something to do with your hair? Or is that another red herring?

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Yeah it did but that was at least two years ago. What a life I've led eh?

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Sounds riveting! You should write a book!

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I couldn't even write a letter! So how would I do a book?

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Do what everyone else does: Hire a professional writer to write it for you!

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Know any writers then?

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Yeah, me!

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Hey, if anyone is going to write his biography "The life of a tree" then it will be me. And i know exactly how you got the nickname and who gave it to you.

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OK, chill. I was just kidding...

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"I came from a seed. I grew into a spout and.......zzzzzzzz......zzzzzzzz"

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like that only ten times more exciting "A seed fell from the heavens and penatrate the soil like a bullet. then as the months and years past it began to grow, bursting out of its hard shell and reaching back up to the heavens for the light it so desperatly needed to survive."

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I'm always desperate to survive when you are around!

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why because you the company or because you think i am a cerial killer who has decide to kill people instead of cerial.

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SERIAL NOT CERIAL. God, can you spell? When is Final Chapter coming up?

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i know what i spelt it as, maybe you should read the whole post.

it will be finished today.

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So. You're gonna kill the Hunny Monster

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I thought he was dead anyway? I haven't seen him in years.

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the huney monster is already dead, that why he isnt in comercials anymore

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Who can resist this?

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Lol, what a legend. I miss him, lol!

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lol anyway can we get off the topic of the honey monster and get back on topic. you can talk about him in the general chat section.

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Me too!

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Episode 23 “Exodus part 1”

Greg was in the jungle collecting fruit for Claire and himself when he heard someone walking through the jungle. He jumped down from the tree and turned swiftly around to have his nose inches away from the barrel of a rifle.
“Who are you and what are you doing out here?” The women holding the rifle said with a slight French accent,
“I could ask you the same question,” Greg said pushing the gun away from his face.
“Are you one of Sayid’s friends?” She asks, Greg pauses for a few seconds and then answers,
“You’re the French chick aren’t you? Danielle?”
“Take me to Sayid now,” The women said not answering Greg’s question.

Back on the beach, Walt see’s Greg appear from the forest followed by Danielle,
“Sayid, you have a visitor!” Greg shouts, soon everyone but Sayid was gathered around the French chick.
“Who is she?” Greg hears Michael say,
“It’s gotta be that French chick,” Sawyer says holding a stick,
“Calm down everyone, it’s alright” Sayid says pushing through the crowd. Sawyer throws the stick aside and Greg goes to Claire to protect her from the stranger just in case they attacked. Danielle watched Greg put an arm around Claire and kiss his son on the forehead before looking back at Danielle.
“Danielle? Danielle? What are you doing here?” Sayid asks. Danielle stops staring at Claire and Greg and she turns to face Sayid before saying,
“The others are coming,” Rousseau said, the crowd began to whisper amongst themselves Greg put both arms around Claire and Looked at Chris who was playing with the knife that Locke had given him to hunt boar with.

“Our ship went aground on this island 16 years ago. There were six of us. My team. Six. By that time, I was already seven months pregnant. I delivered the infant myself. The baby and I were together for only one week, when I saw black smoke. A pillar of black smoke five kilometers inland. That night, they came. They came and took her. Alex. They took my baby. And now they’re coming again. They’re coming for all of you.” Rousseau explains. The crowd starts to whisper stuff to each other trying to figure out what she meant.
“Who is coming?” Jack asks stepping forward,
“The others, you have only three choices, run, hide or die,” Rousseau explains,
“Excuse me but who do you think you are telling me what choices I have,” Greg said walking towards Rousseau,
“What you think there are more choices you have?” Rousseau asks,
“Yes, I do, these people, they can die cant they?” Greg asks,
“Yes but…..” Rousseau starts,
“No buts, anything that can die can be beaten. And it’s not like I am not prepared for them,” Greg says revealing his two 8mm pistils.
“You may be armed but they are smart, you will have to have an army to beat them,” Rousseau explains,
“How do you know Rousseau?” Greg asks,
“Excuse me?” Rousseau asks back,
“How do you know you need an army to beat them? From what Sayid has told me you are always running from them. Is that the choice you have picked, to run?” Greg asks,
“I didn’t pick any choice, you can’t hide from these people and dieing is the easy way out. Running seemed like the only option left.” Rousseau answered sadly,
“Don’t you think that maybe it was a coincidence that your baby was taken when you saw the pillar of black smoke?” Greg asks Rousseau was silent, she didn’t know whether it was a coincidence or it was them all she knew was Alex was taken when the fire that gave off the pillar of black smoke was lit. Jack and Locke broke the crowd up and then walked along the beach and talking about Rousseau.

After hearing what Rousseau had to say Greg just felt like sunbathing. Claire sat next to Greg but only to talk to him.
“So do you think what Rousseau said about the black smoke and the others is true?” Claire asks,
“Nope” Greg answers simply,
“Why not?” Claire asks as if she believes Rousseau.
“She expects us to o what she does and that run away well I am tired of running. If the others do come then I shall make a fight of it. But I know when people are lying and Rousseau was lying,” Greg says his head still facing upwards.
“But what if they do come?” Claire asks,
“Then they shall be met by my guns and a hail of bullets. They aren’t invincible, they are not like that thing out there, they can die,” Greg explains,
“And so can you. If you want to stay and fight then fine but I will not let you fight if I know the chances of you winning are very slim.” Claire says, Greg looked in her direction and noticed that she was crying. He sat up and cuddled her and said,
“Claire, they aren’t even going to show up. I don’t now what she is planning but she is most defiantly lying. She didn’t bother to come into our camp earlier so why would she come now?” Greg said kissing Claire on the forehead and whipping her tears away.
“Yo Greg are you going to help us set the raft off? We need more man power if Michael is going to get the raft into the sea,” a man said, Greg looked around and saw Chris.
“Sure I’ll help,” Greg says standing up and following Chris to the raft launch site.

“You need to get ‘em in there tight and you need leverage to get ‘em on the rails” Michael shouts to the crowd.
“Yeah that’s good.” Charlie says
“Good. That’s good. Okay. That’s good, man. Just get it under there, okay? Okay. You all right?” Michael says to Locke
“Yep. “ Locke answers
“So listen, on my count, I’ll do, ‘one, two, three, lift,’ and then push, okay? Got it?” Michael says to the crowd,
“Okay.” Charlie says
“Got it.” Sawyer says,
“Okay, come on. Once we get it down to the water line, we’ll drop it and load it up. All right. Ready? One. Two. Three. Lift!” Michael shouts. Sawyer and Hurley lift the raft with the levers, and the other survivors push/pull it a small way down the rails “Push! Push! Come on, guys. Push. Push! Use your levers. Use the levers. Yeah. Good, good. One, two, three, lift. Hey, keep it straight.” Michael shouts checking if it is going straight. The raft starts sliding down squint.
Jin says something in Korean as the raft slips off the rails and the mast of the raft snaps in two.
“Ow no, Come on, I can’t believe this, Can’t believe it!” Michael shouts looking at Sawyer
“What ya lookin’ at me for? It’s not my fault,” Sawyer says to Michael,
“You missed the lever!” Michael shouts really annoyed that his rafts mat has broken. Greg was getting impatient. He had been holding his bamboo stick for as long as he could manage. The fact that the rafts mast had broken meant that it wouldn’t be fixed for a while, giving Greg enough time to go check on Jack and Locke. No doubt they would have some plan prepared, and Greg wanted in.

As Greg walked along the beach in search of Rousseau, Jack and Locke he saw Chris, who ran towards him and asks,
“Have you seen Rousseau, Jack and Locke anywhere?”
“Nope but I am guessing you want to join in with there scheme,” Greg said,
“Yeah how did you know?” Chris asks,
“Because I want in too, it’s too dangerous with that monster out there and even with the French chick with us we could still be in danger.” Greg explains
“What do you mean we will still be in danger?” Chris asks,
“Well this French woman is obviously not to be trusted. Sayid has told me a lot about her, like when she shot all her team mates.” Greg said,
“But she said the thing killed them,” Chris said slightly confused,
“No she said it killed them, it killed them all. There are 3 things it could be, the monster, these others, or something else,” Greg said,
“What you mean like a polar bear?” Chris asks, but Greg shook his head,
“No, something else that we don’t know of, like a decease or even her.” Greg said as he continued down the beach. Chris was totally confused but followed anyway hoping it would be explained at the black rock whatever it was.

Greg and Chris catch up with Jack, Locke and Rousseau who were joined by Sayid and Hurley.
“Well, well, well, planning a field trip and didn’t invite us two!” Greg shouts walking up to them.
“What do you want Greg?” Sayid asks,
“Well Sayid I don’t want anything, but me and Chris hear want to join your little trip out to this black rock,” Greg said,
“It is too dangerous, I can only protect a certain number of you and some of these guys have guns and know how to use them,” Rousseau says turning her back to Greg and looking at Sayid, Jack, Locke and Hurley who roll there eyes as if to say that she was wrong about something.
“Sorry let me introduce myself, my name is Greg Young, and I am the Australian equivalent of a US marshal, ow and I am seriously heavily armed,” Greg says revealing his pistils o Rousseau who starts to pick up her Jaw.
“Right…..well…..welcome aboard…..what about him?” Rousseau asks pointing to Chris. Chris looks at the floor and begins to turn around but Greg grabs his shoulder and says,
“Chris here can use a dagger better than anyone else I know except for Jonny Locke but he will make an excellent team player and will be of more use than we could without him,” Greg explains sticking up for Chris who was stunned Greg of all people would do so.
“Very well he can come,” Rousseau said,
“Great, so where are we heading?” Greg asks.

In a flashback Greg is sat in the airport bar having a last drink before he flies Claire to LA and drops Kate off to get her jail sentence. Suddenly a man comes sits down next to him and orders a tequila and tonic. His accent is Scottish. The man reaches into his pocket and takes out a leather wallet. He checks the wallet and then says,
“Damn it,” Greg looks at him and sees that he is short on cash.
“Here let me get these in for you mate,” Greg says pulling out his black leather wallet and rifling through the many notes he has in it until he found a five dollar bill which he paid the barman with.
“Thanks,” The man says and then takes a quick glance at the wallet before saying, “wow, you aren’t short on cash are you? What did you do rob a bank?” The man asked, Greg smiles and says,
“No but I caught the person who did,” Greg says back. The man chuckles not realizing that it was a true story.
“So what’s your name?” the Scottish man asks,
“It’s Greg, Greg Young,” Greg answers, there is an uncomfortable pause before the man says,
“I’m Chris,” and he puts out his hand for Greg to shake, which he does.
“So Chris, what seat are you in?” Greg asks,
“43F,” Chris answers,
“Next to Ana- Lucia no doubt,” Greg says,
“Who’s she?” Chris asks,
“Ow she’s a work colleague, she is alright as long as you keep her on your good side and just keep the tequila and tonic coming.” Greg says,
“Right, so what do you do Greg? What’s your Job?” Chris asks,
“If I told you that I would have to kill you,” Greg says, Chris laughs but is silenced when Greg reveals his police badge which said,
Greg Young, Marshal
Of
Sydney Police department
And a very unflattering photo.
“Jesus, you a cop!” Chris shouts in total shock.
“Yes but I would prefer it if you didn’t broadcast it to the entire airport,” Greg said looking around at the people at the bar’s tables who had all turned around to him.
“Sorry it’s just, I have never met a cop before, I thought they were all uniform and really mean,” Chris said getting over the shock.
“Well you’re in luck because you’re going to be sitting next to another,” Greg said smiling,
“What? Ana-Lucia?” Chris asks and Greg nods.
“Hey do you think you could hurry up and finish your drink, we have a plane to catch!” Edward Mars shouted from outside of the bar area,
“Who’s that?” Chris asked,
“That is my work colleague,” Greg said,
“No not him, her,” Chris said pointing to Kate who was being held by the cuffs by Edward.
“That is Kate, the reason why I am going to LA,” Greg said quickly finishing his drink and rushing off to Edward and Kate. Claire was sat in a seat behind them and he grabbed her hand and dragged her to the boarding bay where they would board flight 815.

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That was great, blitz!!!! And Chris is getting plenty of ivolvement, I see! Thanks!! I'm really looking forward to part 2!!!!!

PS Did you use the transcripts at all?

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the transcripts were my bible through that episode. i took lots of quotes from them but i do realise that i didnt actually finish exodus part 1 but it was getting quite long woth the flashback so i will add it to part 2

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No worries, I loved it anyway! And I'm glad I could help!

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Another brilliant installment Blitz. Keep it up!

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its been a mad week with this chirpy malarky but i have finally finished Exsodus part 2.

Episode 24 “Exodus part 2”

In the Jungle, Rain begins to pour as the group, Greg, Chris, Jack, Locke, Hurley, Rousseau and Kate, walk onwards to the black rock. Locke suddenly stops and halts them all.
“What’s the matter John?” Jack asks but Locke hushes him. Kate suddenly perks up as if she has heard something.
“Did you hear that?” Kate asks Rousseau who shrugs and carries on walking. Suddenly a thunderous noise blared from behind the Group, like a yelping sound, and it was getting closer. The bushes began to rustle and Rousseau and Greg both pointed there guns towards the bushes. Suddenly Arzt stumbled out of the bushes.
“Run! Run! Run!” He screams as the loud howling of the monster became closer. Greg grabbed Chris’s arm and dragged his off into the jungle. Jack, Kate and Rousseau rushed off in a different direction.
“What the hell are you doing Locke is still back there!” Chris shouts trying to release his arm as they ran.
“What ever that thing is it could kill us all in a few seconds so if you appreciate your life then you will spend it running from that thing.” Greg said in a state of urgency trying to keep his life from ending on the island.
“Well can’t you just kill it; I mean you have.…..” Chris started
“Damn it Chris that thing is unstoppable. Bullets wont harm it, nor will knives or a f****ing air strike now spend more time running and less time talking and I may be able to save your life!” Greg shouts clearly scared of whatever it was. Then again Greg had a right to be. He, along with Locke are the only people that have seen the monster. Locke seemed calm and peaceful when it was coming for them. It was almost like he wanted it to get to him. Greg on the other hand couldn’t get away from it fast enough. This mad Chris wonders if they had both seen different things or was Locke unafraid of the unknown. All Chris knew was to run and Greg was helping him with that.

After a while of running Greg and Chris reached a clearing. The monster noises couldn’t be heard and it seemed safe.
“So can you tell me what we are running from?” Chris asks hoping it would clear things up.
“There are some things in life that are best left unknown, this is one of them,” Greg said taking a drink from his bottle.
“Is that because you don’t know what it is yourself?” Chris asked which seemed to annoy Greg,
“Do you really want to know what it is; do you really want to know what we were running from?” Greg asks,
“Yes!” Chris shouts incredibly impatiently.
“Ok, that thing is fear, not frightening but it IS fear. It knows how to make us all scared; it knows how to break us all. First I will do something to make you scared, then it attacks you when you are weak.” Greg explains, Chris looked at him and then started laughing. Greg snapped and picked Chris up and pinned him to a tree. “What’s so funny Chris?!” Greg shouts as he continues to hold Chris to the tree.
“Well for one fear exists in the mind only and second there should be nothing that can scare you, your Greg, Australia’s finest. What could possibly scare you into running like that?” Chris asks very calmly for someone who is being pinned to a tree by Greg. Greg stared into Chris’s eyes and then slowly let Chris down. “So what has it rattled in your cage so much that you have to run from it?” Chris asks again.
“The only thing more precious to me than my fathers gun, Claire,” Greg said turning around when he said it. Chris’s jaw dropped, he knew Greg would do anything for Claire but he didn’t think that something could use it to control Greg. This thing obviously knew what it was doing to push Greg’s buttons like it did. Chris hoped that it didn’t start on him.
“So what do we do know?” Chris asks looking around to try and figure out where to head next. When he turned back to Greg he had already started to walk into the forest.

Greg rushes through the forest followed by Chris.
“Wait for me; we are not all wild men!” Chris shouts,
“Who say I am?!” Greg shouts back unwilling to stop. Suddenly Greg stops. Chris stops just before ramming into Greg.
“What’s wrong…..” Chris starts before noticing Greg had a gun pointed at his face.
“Rousseau it alright, it’s just Greg and Chris,” Jack said putting a hand on Rousseau’s shoulder. She rolled his hand off and lowered her gun saying,
“You should be more careful, or next time it might not be my gun that is the one that is pointed at you head.”
“Yeah and the next time that happens I will shoot the person, regardless of who it is,” Greg said implying that if Rousseau ever held a gun to his head again he would shoot her.
“Its good to see you too,” Chris said from behind Greg. There was a long pause of about a minute before Greg says,
“So are we going to stand here all day or are we going to find this rock,”
“We have found it,” Rousseau says pointing her rifle at the huge wooden ship to her right. Everyone turned to the direction the gun was pointing to see a huge wooden ship with the words “The Black Rock” engraved on the side. The Group were stunned not at the size of the ship but the fact that it was inland.
“Dude I don’t know if anyone has noticed but your black rock seems to be a ship,” Hurley said breaking the stunned silence.
“Well done Hurley,” Chris says stepping forward from behind Greg.
“How does something like this happen?” Hurley asks.
“Are you on the same island I am?” Rousseau asks,
“I guess that explains it,” Hurley says.

Greg watches Rousseau constantly whilst Arzt gives his theory on how the ship has gotten a couple of miles inland. Greg didn’t trust Rousseau at all; there was something about her that he didn’t like. Rousseau then turns away from Arzt and heads towards the jungle.
“Hey, Hey, Where are you going?!” Jack shouts to Rousseau. Rousseau turns to face Jack and says,
“The explosives are in the hold of the ship.” Rousseau says and she turns around to head back into the jungle.
“Rousseau waits!” Jack shouts. Rousseau stops but doesn’t turn around.
“I did what you asked. You need dynamite. You don’t need me.” Rousseau says continuing to head off into the jungle. Jack makes to go after her but Locke stops him and says,
“Let her go Jack,” Suddenly Greg turns in the same direction as Rousseau and marches off into the jungle after her.
“Hey where are you going?” Jack shouts at Greg,
“I am going after Rousseau, I don’t trust her and usually I am right about these things,” Greg says running off into the jungle. Chris peruses and soon catches up.
“What are you doing? You can’t just keep chasing after people you don’t trust, you could be wrong,” Chris says,
“Chris, something is up with her. I don’t know what it is but there is something odd. It is my job to know this stuff about people. I need you to make user that Jack, Kate, Hurley and Locke get back to the hatch safely. I have o chase Rousseau and someone need to keep that thing from harming them.” Greg said and he continues into the jungle,
“Wait, I thought you said you couldn’t stop it!” Chris shouts,
“You can’t, but as long as it doesn’t know your fear then you are safe, just stand still and stare into it. Let it find out your fear. It won’t do anything to you there and then, I promise,” Greg Said before rushing off into the jungle after Rousseau, leaving Chris to ponder what Greg had just said.

Greg stopped as he came close to Rousseau who was cautiously stepping through the forest. Greg ducked behind a tree as she peered over at him. Greg waited a few seconds and then peered round where he saw her walking in the direction she was. Greg stepped out from the tree and followed. He had moved about 10 meters when he saw Rousseau’s head turn slightly. Greg rolled behind a bush. When he did she sharply turned to where he used to be. Greg peered through the bush at Rousseau who smiled and carried on walking. Greg felt safe and stood up. He brushed the leaves off himself and stepped out into the path to see that Rousseau had vanished.
“What the?” Greg asked himself rushed to the spot where she used to be. When he placed his foot on the exact spot she used to be he felt something press against his head then a clicking sound. Greg tried not to turn his head but wanted to know who had a gun to his head. Could it be them? The others that Rousseau had mentioned.
“Why were you following me?” A woman said with a French accent. Greg knew straight away that it was Rousseau.
“You’re a sneaky B**ch aren’t you,” Greg said trying to keep a level head.
“Why were you following me?” Rousseau asks more aggressively.
“Why? You going to shoot me if I don’t tell you?” Greg asks back but the clicking of a bullet being placed into the barrel of her rifle answered his question.
“You said that you would kill me if I ever held a gun to your head again, do you want to try it?” Rousseau said smiling at Greg. Greg grunted back and used his left hand to lash out and push the gun from his head and punch Rousseau in the gut but she was strong and made him release his grip on the gun before hitting around the head with it. Greg fell backwards to the floor with blood pouring from the left side on his head. Rousseau pointed the gun at Greg who was still conscious. “Why were you following me?” Rousseau asked again. Greg didn’t see any way out of this one and was slightly scared by the fact that she had stopped him from disarming her. Not many people could do that but the ones that could earned the few seconds of time it gave them to do something to Greg and Rousseau used her time wisely.
“I don’t trust you Rousseau. When you arrived in camp you stared at me and Claire. I didn’t know why at first but I have a feeling why. You want to take my son because you lost your own child…..” Greg started but was kicked in the ribs by Rousseau. The pin shot around his body like lightning and was incredibly painful.
“You know nothing about Alex!” Rousseau shouts. Greg fights the pain away and says,
“I know she’s alive and that she has grown since you last saw her. If you kill me then you will regret leaving my son without a father.” Greg said
“You know where Alex is? Tell me where she is!” Rousseau shouts angrily.
“No, no, no, I don’t know where she is but I know she is alive,” Greg said scared that she would shoot him. At first Greg knew she wouldn’t but now she cannot control herself she could do anything.
“How do I know you aren’t lying?” Rousseau asks still angry.
“Because if I knew where your daughter was then I would thank her for saving Claire from those other people. But I haven’t got round to doing that yet because I haven’t seen her since.” Greg said Rousseau stared at Greg for a while to try and work him out and then said,
“Very well, but if you don’t trust me then I am sorry,” Rousseau said lowering her gun.
“For what?” Greg asks,
“This,” Rousseau said raising her gun and jabbing it into Greg’s face, knocking him unconscious.

When Greg woke up he was layed in the jungle. Blood everywhere and he felt like he did the day he was hit by the car except he felt like he blocked the impact with his head. He slowly sat up and put his and to his head. Its was still bleeding but not as bad as it was. Greg looked around still a bit dazzed by the blow and grabbed a stick. He then used the stick to help himself up and help him hobble off in the direction he thinks would lead him back to her. Greg was hobbling through the jungle when he heard the whispers of people talking around him. The whispers seemed to follow the wind and pass through him like ghosts. Greg tried to hear what they were saying but his head was throbbing and he was unable to concentrate.
“What do you want from me? What is it that you want?!” Greg shouts at the empty words of on the wind. As soon as he did they stopped as if someone had been watching T.V. and simply switched them off. Greg had never been more scared in his life. It was as if everything on this island was there to scared him and be able to break him.

Greg rushed through the jungle completely forgetting about his head and concentrating more on getting back to the beach where he was hoping Rousseau would be. He pushed his way through bushes and he rolled down a big mound. He landed on his front and was looking at some very muddy trainers,
“Greg, are you alright?” a woman asked in her English accent.
“Take me to the beach,” Greg coughed as the dust was sucked into his lungs. Rachel helped Greg up and helped him walk the rest of the way towards the beach.

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Last edited by Blitz_rockon on Wed Jan 17, 2007 12:38 pm; edited 1 time in total

Whoa, that was amazing, blitz!!!! I can't wait for the final part of the season!!!!!!!!!!!!

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i have changed the end slightly because i realise that Chris isnt soposed to be there. Chris is still at the Black Rock when all this is happening.

I am glad you liked it but it only gets better once we hit th finall part of the fanalie.

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I can't wait!!!!!!! Very Happy

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i am going to try and do it so we see what Greg and Chris are doing. that way i can skip the boring bits by showing you what is happening with the other person.

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Ah, yes, skipping boring bits is always a good thing to do!

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FINAL PHASE!!! CANNOT WAIT!!

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and then about 3 quaters of season 2 to do and then its on to season three to stop the huge cliffhanger i left in live together, die alone

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Hurray!!! I'll try and get all of the transcripts of the season 2 episodes that you haven't done written for you!

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Last edited by Sawbucks on Fri Jan 19, 2007 4:48 pm; edited 1 time in total

season two will be excelent, every episode will leave you ether saying "hmmm i didnt know that about Greg" or "OMG i want to read more!"

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Glad to hear it!!! I can't wait!!! Very Happy

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A lot is going on. Wooohoo

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Episode 25 “Exodus part 3”

The beach was quite silent, Claire was with Charlie with the baby, Sayid was playing with his gun that Jack had given him. Suddenly Rachel burst out of the tree line partly carrying Greg whose face was very blooded.
“HELP! I need some help here NOW!” Rachel shouts as she continues down the beach towards Sayid.
“What happened?” Sayid asks,
“That b**ch Rousseau attacked me, do you know where she is? I think she might be planning something,” Greg said worried about Claire and the baby.
“What? Rousseau wouldn’t do a thing like this unless she was provoked or had good reason to,” Sayid said trying to make sense of it all.
“Well when you find her tell her to stay away from Claire and the baby or she will have something to be violent about,” Greg threatened as Rachel carried him to his tent.

On the way to the tent Claire and Charlie were sat on a log. Charlie was playing his guitar whilst Claire rocked the baby to sleep. They spotted Rachel helping Greg walk and Greg whose face was covered in blood and both looked incredible shocked.
“What’s happened?” Claire asks very worried. She was shaking at the sight of Greg so badly injured and even Charlie looked sympathetically at Greg.
“Rousseau attacked him,” Rachel said
“What why?” Claire asks,
“I don’t know why, but I am going to ask her once I find her,” Greg said
“What you’re not going after her, not after she has done this to you. You are going to stay here and let me look after you. I don’t want you running off into the jungle and getting……” Claire said pausing at the end because she couldn’t bear the thought of anything worse happening.
“Don’t worry Claire, I will be fine, its you I am worried about,” Greg said before Rachel went inside Greg’s tent and lay him down.
“You need to rest, I shall get some cloths to clean up your face but then you have to rest and let Claire look after you,” Rachel said from the door of the tent,
“But who is going to protect her Rachel. Charlie is practically useless without a weapon and even then you won’t be able to stop Rousseau. I am supposed to be protecting her and looking after her not the other way around,” Greg said getting angry at the thought of what Rousseau could do to Claire.
“I will look after Claire, you must rest and don’t worry, I wont let anyone get within 5 meters of Claire,” Rachel said.
“Thank you Rachel,” Greg said smiling at Rachel thankfully.
“Don’t mention it,” Rachel said smiling back and then she disappeared from the doorway and off to the caves for some clothes.

A few hours before Greg was attacked, Chris, Jack, Hurley, Locke, Arzt and Kate were at the Black Rock. Jack, Locke and Kate had volunteered to go in and get the dynamite, leaving Hurley and Chris outside listening to Arzt and talking about his third wife.
“…and then my third wife, she says, get this, she says ‘I didn’t sign up for this.’ You tell me, what the hell is that even supposed to mean?” Arzt says but then noticed that Chris is playing with his knife whilst Hurley stares into the distance. “Am I boring you?” he asks surprising Hurley and Chris who both look at him.
“No, of course not, you were saying something about clouds right?” Chris asks,
“No I was not talking about ‘clouds’. Ok I admit that I am not the coolest person to go on your little adventures,” Arzt said his face went red and he was pretty angry at them both.
“So what were you talking about?” Chris said trying to sound interested.
“I know a clique when I see it. I teach high school, pally! You know, you people think that you’re the only ones on this island doing anything of value. I got news for you. There were 40 other survivors of this plane crash, and we are all people too.” Arzt says lecturing Chris on the other 40 survivors.
“Ok, what every dude,” Hurley says sarcastically,
“And it’s not just the teenagers either. You know, the gym teachers, do you think they let me sit with them in the cafeteria? No, they do not.” Arzt complains
“Dude this is all in your head,” Hurley says,
“Yeah you are just paranoid,” Chris says,
“Really? Then, you explain to me why Kate gets the best pieces of wreckage to build her shelter? And the Korean guy. Does he catch fish for everyone? No. He does not. He doesn’t. And some of us have actually lost weight while we were here. Now, do you mind telling me where you’re hiding the carbs? That Australian guy that you hang around with Chris, he had a go at me this morning, I bet he wouldn’t dare say anything like that to Jack, or Kate or Sawyer would he?” Arzt complains
“Well…….” Chris said thinking about it but lost concentration when Jack, Kate and Locke came out with the box of dynamite.
“What the hell are you people doing? Wait, wait. Stop. Stop right where you are. All right, I want you to put that down carefully. Put it down carefully. Put it gently…Gently. Damn it! Carefully, gently. Gently. Get outta there. Get away from it. Come on. Get out. Move away from it!” Arzt shouts as if he was the leader all of a sudden.
“What the hell is your…..?” Jack starts but is silence by another round by Arzt,
“Shh. be quiet. Do any of you have any idea what happens to dynamite in 90-plus degree heat? Huh? Do you know? Any of you? It sweats nitro-glycerin.” Arzt lecture as he lifts the lid off the crate with a knife. Jack steps forward to take a look but Arzt point the knife and him and says
“Whoa, what are you doing? Did I ask you to come closer?” Jack backs away and Arzt picks up a stick of dynamite.
“Dynamite…is nitro-glycerin stabilized by clay. Nitro-glycerin…is the most dangerous and unstable explosive known to man. Hey, Kate, gimme your shirt.” Arzt continues to lecture. Kate raises an eyebrow at the demand but Arzt was demanding.
“Now. Princess, give me your shirt. I need to wrap the dynamite.” Arzt said impatiently.
Kate takes her shirt off and throws it to Arzt, Chris was half hoping that she wouldn’t have another shirt on but she did.
“Okay, good. Now back up. Back up. Back up. Just back up. Get outta my way.” Arzt says bending down and soaks the shirt in a nearby puddle,
“Any of you ever hear about the guy who invented nitro-glycerin? Probably not, because he blew his freaking face off.” Arzt explains as he carefully raps the stick with the shirt.
“His lab assistant came into the room, saw that his mentor had detonated, and he said, ‘Huh. I guess this stuff does work.’” He finishes wrapping the dynamite, and lets out a sigh
“All right, we’re not gonna take any more of this stuff than we need, because nitro-glycerin is extremely temperamental. So we just…” Arzt says stopped in mid sentence by an almighty explosion. The gang was blown back by the almighty blast as the stick of dynamite in Arzt’s hand detonates and blasts poor Arzt into millions of pieces. As Chris slowly gets up from the ground he can see bits of Arzt falling from the sky.
“Dude,” Hurley said totally stunned at what had just happened.

Back on the beach about 3 hours since Greg had arrived on the beach with his face covered in blood. Greg’s wounds had been treated and patched up with pads. His face was still slightly swollen and sore but apart from that he was ok.
“Thanks Sun,” Greg said smiling; Sun turned to Greg and gave a quick smile before rushing out of the tent. Greg lay down and looked up at the roof of the tent but it wasn’t long before people were asking how he was, the first was Claire.
“Hey you, how are you?” Claire said sitting down by Greg and stroking his head making sure to avoid the bruising,
“Fine, Sun did a great job,” Greg said smiling at Claire who smiled back.
“So what’s Charlie doing to keep you alive?” Greg asks curious at what Charlie was doing.
“He played us his new song he wrote and he made a Bjorn,” Claire said happy with what Charlie ha done to keep her and the baby entertained.
“A Bjorn, wow so they can teach monkeys new tricks,” Greg joked,
“Don’t be mean, he asked me to go and check on you,” Claire said,
“Really because by the sound of it, it was almost like he was keeping you with him,” Greg said looking into Claire’s deep ice blue eyes for a hint of a lie.
“Cant you just accept that me and him can hang around together,” Claire said backing away from Greg. Greg laid back down and signs,
“I want to Claire, really I do but I always see Thomas in him somewhere and it makes me so mad.” Greg said his hands turning to fists. Claire grabbed one of Greg’s hands and held it tight. Greg felt his hand relax in hers and he soon calmed down.
“Greg, Charlie is nothing like Thomas, ok, you two should stop this game because I don’t want to see anyone get hurt,” Claire says saddened by there constant fighting.
“Your right Claire, but its not me you should be worried about getting hurt, nor Charlie,” Greg said and turned over so he wasn’t facing Claire. She let go of his hand and burst out of the tent. Greg eyes slowly closed until he could see nothing.

Greg was woken up by a scream; although it could have been anyone something told Greg that it was Claire. Greg quickly jumped up and staggered to try and stop himself from falling over and went out of the tent. Greg’s eyes widened as he saw everyone crowding around Claire. He saw Steve run past to the crowd so Greg grabbed his shoulder and said,
“Hey Steve, what’s going on?”
“I don’t know man but I think its something to do with that French chick,” Steve said before shrugging off Greg’s hand and rushing to join the crowd.
“Rousseau,” Greg cursed under his breath, his teeth gritted together and his eyes went red but he got control over himself again when he saw Claire pushing her way through the crowd to the tent Greg had just left.
“What happened Claire, what has she done?” Greg asks but notices the cut on Claire’s head, and strokes her fringe away so he can see it better.
“Rousseau, she too our baby Greg, She took Aaron,” Claire sobs; Greg is horrified by what Claire had just said and steps forward and cuddles Claire.
“Its ok Claire, I will get him back, I will get Aaron back,” Greg said. Greg spotted Charlie and Sayid marching down the beach towards them.
“Don’t worry Claire, I shall get turnip head back,” Charlie said,
“Not without me Charlie and its Aaron,” Greg said letting go of Claire and marching up Rachel.
“I trusted you Rachel, you have let me down big time,” Greg said giving her a cold glare.
“I am sorry but…….” Rachel started, Greg could see that Rousseau had gotten to her first and had hit her with her gun, Rachel had a cut on the right side of her forehead but Greg felt no sympathy for her.
“Save your words until I get back,” Greg said coldly
“You are going nowhere Greg,” Sayid said strictly
“Give me one good reason why,” Greg said angrily
“Because you are emotionally involved and may do something stupid and you haven’t recovered from the incident…..” Sayid explains
“No that b**ch did it to me, and now she has taken my son, now are you going to let me past or are we going to stand here all day instead of out there finding Aaron,” Greg said staring at Sayid with a chilling glare. Sayid knew that Greg’s mind was made up and that it would be impossible to get him to change his mind, the only thing Sayid could do is make sure Greg does not make it any more personal that it already was.
“You must not let it compromise you Greg, I am trusting you to not jump in with guns blazing, can I trust you to not have Rousseau at gunpoint until we know why she took the baby?” Sayid asks,
“I promise Sayid I will not let it corrupt my judgment,” Greg said rushing off into the jungle with Sayid soon following.
“Hey! Wait for me!” Charlie shouts after them as he rushes in the direction they disappeared to.

Chris, Jack, Kate, Locke and Hurley are walking back to the hatch with some dynamite when Chris stops.
“What’s wrong Chris?” Kate asks,
“Do you hear that?” Chris asks,
“Hear what?” Jack asks turning around to Chris,
“Exactly, no birds, no rustling bushes, heck even our footsteps have been silenced,” Chris says looking around him and trying to figure it all out. Suddenly He seems a Black shape float across the jungle in the corner of his eye. His head snaps to face in the direction but he see’s nothing.
“What’ that!” Kate shouts pointing to a black line of smoke float across the forest, this time Chris catches a glimpse of it.
“I think we should run,” Chris says still fixed on the point where the smoke was. Everybody stood still. Suddenly the booming roar of the monster erupts from the jungle.
“Run!” Chris shouts pushing Kate and Jack forwards. They all run forwards except for Locke who for some reason stays behind.
“Locke, what are you doing?” Jack said turning back to Locke
“No Jack, you have to go!” Chris shouts Grabbing Jacks arm,
“But what about John?” Jack asks trying to get himself free,
“I shall go for Locke, you run…….NOW!” Chris shouts, Jack rushes off after Kate and leave Chris to go after Locke.

Chris rushes through the forest hoping that he wasn’t too late. Although he seemed to be heading towards the sounds of the monsters roars and mechanical clicking noises \Chris had to save Locke.
“Locke!” Chris shouts hoping that Locke could answer him but he got no reply. Suddenly Chris hears Locke but it only makes his fears worse,
“Ahhhhhhhh!” Locke shouts, Chris rushes to the sound and reaches the path to find Locke being dragged by a smoky-tendril.
“Hang on Locke!” Chris shouts and pursues Locke. When Chris got close enough he dived for Locke and caught Locke’s hand before he too was dragged away with ease. Chris grabs Locke’s other hand as he is dragged through the shrubbery and mud. Chris then swings his legs around so that they were in front of him and digs his heals into the mud. The attempt to slow the monster was a failure as Locke refused to stop.

Suddenly the ground cracked in front of them and a hole formed. As Locke was pulled towards it Chris braced himself. As Locke was pulled down the hole Chris managed to catch his feet on the sides of the hole where he managed to halt the monsters kidnapping of Locke.
“Let me go Chris, I shall be alright,” Locke said,
“Just shut up and hold on Locke!” Chris shouts as the pain hits him.
“Let me go, it wont hurt me,” Locke says,
“No I am not letting you go Locke!” Chris shouts as he fights with the monster. Jack, Kate and Hurley arrive to see Chris holding onto Locke for dear life. They don’t know what to do; there wasn’t much they could do.
“Kate get the dynamite and throw it down the hole,” Chris said,
“No way, it could blow us all up,” Kate argued,
“Just do it princess before I blow you up!” Chris shouts angrily. Kate starts to take off her pack and search through it.
“Its not in your pack Kate, it’s in mine,” Jack said, Kate stares at Jack but Jack hurries her to get the dynamite.
“Now throw it down the hole,” Chris says, there is a long pause which was not wanted at a time like this. “Now Kate!” Chris shouts and Kate drops the dynamite down the hole. There is a deadly silence before a huge explosion that shakes the ground. Chris feels himself able to pull Locke up and him, Jack and Kate manage to pull Locke up before the roaring flames burst out of the hole, followed by a cloud of animated black smoke. Chris stares at the smoke before it disappears into the jungle. The group rest for a while after the ordeal before heading off to the hatch with the remaining dynamite.
Greg pounds through the forest towards the black smoke that Sayid explained was where Rousseau would be going.
“Wait for me!” Charlie shouts from behind Sayid. Greg was a bit of a way in front of Sayid and Charlie. They had lost sight of him.
“I know he is going to do something stupid, I know it,” Sayid curses as he runs through the forest. Greg was relentless to stop and kept pounding through the forest. Although Sayid couldn’t stop Greg something did. Greg’s foot got caught by something and he was thrown to the ground.
“Damn tree roots!” Greg curses as he sits up and gets his leg free. As he does he notices that it isn’t a tree root, but the skeletal remains of a priest.

Greg is shocked by his find, what was a priest doing al the way out here? Greg inspected the body and noticed one thing a priest would never carry around, a gun.
“Your no priest,” Greg said to the body and pulled out the gun. The gun still had some bullets left and the priest had a box of bullets in his pocket. Although Greg didn’t think fleecing the dead was a good idea he was used to inspecting the dead.

“Greg!” Charlie shouts as he and Sayid follow Greg’s tracks.
“He promised me he wouldn’t go in guns blazing; I knew I shouldn’t have let him come,” Sayid curses,
“We don’t even know he has gone after Rousseau, he might have got caught up or something.” Charlie said defending the one person he would rather see in trouble.
“Well we can’t take any chances, come on,” Sayid said marching forwards.
“Ok I’m coming, although he could be following us,” Charlie said turning around and walking backwards. As he did he tripped over something.
“What the……” Charlie said regaining his senses from the fall and looking at what tripped him up. To Charlie’s horror the object was a body, the body of a priest.
“Holy crap!” Charlie shouts and he edges back from the body.
“What is it Charlie?” Sayid says rushing to Charlie’s aid and spots the priest.
“Who is it?” Charlie asks, Sayid bends down and inspects the body which has a metal cross round its neck.
“It’s a priest,” Sayid says searching the body for more clues and spots the empty gun holster. He looks at Charlie who looks at him still in shock.

Sayid stands up and spots that Greg tracks go off from the direction of the smoke and go left into the jungle.
“Greg has obviously found something more interesting than killing Rousseau,” Charlie Jokes
“What shall we do, follow Greg or go After Aaron?” Sayid asks,
“Well I know what I want to do, if Greg has found something to shoot other than Rousseau then that’s fine but I want to get Claire’s baby back to her,” Charlie says
“Ok you go ahead but its Greg’s baby too and he should be the one to ask Rousseau why she took his son. You can go ahead but I want to know about these priests a little more,” Sayid said following the tracks into the jungle. Charlie starts to walk on but stops and thinks about it. Common sense takes over and after realizing that he is no good against Rousseau on his own he follows Sayid.

Sayid bursts into a clearing to find to his Surprise Greg sitting on the tail of a plane.
“Hi there Sayid, you couldn’t go on without me could you? Or are you here to find out about drug dealer one?” Greg asks,
“Drug dealer one?” Sayid asks trying to make sense of the name,
“You do know they are drug dealers, surely you found the empty gun holster, or at least it was until I took this,” Greg said holding up the gun.
“I had I feeling they were, what are you doing with another gun anyway, you already have two?” Sayid asks,
“Yes I do so I thought I would give it to someone,” Greg says,
“To me?” Sayid asks stepping closer to Greg,
“Nope, to someone I can trust, someone like………Chris,” Greg said jumping off the tail of the beach craft.
“Does he even know how to use a gun?” Sayid asks,
“yep, he has told me all about hi hunting days in Scotland, I think he deserves something from me after his dead sister found my dad’s gun,” Greg says.
“So how do you know they are drug dealers just because they carry around a gun?” Sayid asks, Sayid wasn’t stupid, he knew that if Greg had found the gun first then he would take it, but just because a man carried around a gun didn’t mean he was a drug dealer. Greg must have found something else to make him think such a thing.
“Your not stupid are you Sayid, I didn’t know what they were when I found the gun, for all I know they could have been police officers or just business men who need a little more protection but then I found this plane, and that gave me all the evidence I need o tell you they are drug dealers.” Greg said throwing something towards Sayid, It looked like a statue. Sayid moved out of the way of the object and saw it smash. It was a Virgin Mary statue but this statue held a horrible secret. Sayid could see small bags of some white powder.
“The plane is full of heroin, is that enough proof for you?” Greg said staring at Sayid who looked up from the statue and at Greg with a look of surprise on his face.

Greg and Sayid were examining the powder when Charlie appears from the forest,
“There you two are, I was………wow” Charlie said as he spotted the beach craft up-side-down behind Greg and Sayid.
“And you said there was more in the beach craft?” Sayid said acting as if Charlie hadn’t appeared.
“Yep check it out for yourself,” Greg said. Charlie was very confused, what were they talking about and what was this plane doing here.
“What have you found?” Charlie said trying to answer one question that spiraled in his head.
“The Priests aren’t priest Charlie,” Greg said,
“What?!” Charlie shouts surprised,
“They were drug dealers disguised as priest, probably to avoid detection. They must have been trying to transport the heroin to another country,” Greg explains,
“Heroin?!” Charlie shouts the blood from his face drained out leaving it as white as a sheet,
“Yes, the plane was loaded with heroin,” Sayid said climbing out of the plane and throwing a statute at Charlie. Charlie stepped back and the statue lands in front of him. It smashes open to reveal two small bags of heroin. Charlie stares at the heroin for a while unable to resist he temptation. Suddenly he feels someone slap the back of his head. He turns around and see’s Greg standing behind him.
“Don’t even think about it Charlie, you have gotten off the stuff remember and if you go back on it you can forget being friends with Claire,” Greg said following Sayids lead into the forest.
“You think that I want it, I don’t need it!” Charlie says tearing up the heroin bag.
“Good now all you need to do is to resist the other statues and if you take one you had better pray that you are going to use it for the statue and not for what’s inside.” Greg said walking on. Charlie soon follows him with a smile on his face.

Sayid, Greg and Charlie decided to stick together for the next part of the trek. Rousseau was smart and would defiantly set traps. Greg wouldn’t see the traps at the speed he ran through the jungle and Charlie couldn’t tell a trap from a well placed log or hole.
“There!” Charlie said pointing to some blankets and rushing towards them,
“No Charlie!” Sayid shouted stepping forward to try and stop him. Greg just stood and watched. Although he didn’t want to see anyone get hurt he thought Charlie should learn the difference between setting a trap and actually giving you what you want. The difference was you never get what you want, so everything is a trap. Greg knew that if Charlie did set off a trap and got caught by it then he wouldn’t do it again. Charlie picked up the blanket and unraveled it to reveal a log. Suddenly rocks rained down from a tree above Charlie and the fell on Charlie’s head. Charlie fell backwards and was lying on the floor.
“Charlie!” Sayid shouted rushing to his aid. Charlie sat up and clutched his head and said,
“Ahhhhhh,” Greg came over and stood over him and said,
“Wow, you really are stupid,”
“Shut up! Why didn’t you save me?” Charlie said as if he expected Greg to rescue him from the rocks.
“Dear Charlie, you wont do a good job of looking after Claire whilst I am gone if you lead her into traps. At least if you experience one you will not think that everyone is so nice and will just give you what you want back.,” Greg explains, Charlie didn’t say anything back because apart from Greg being a little bit right, talking to Greg was like being stung by lots of jellyfish. Every word Greg said was like a tiny sting but each tiny sting hurt.
“We need to stop the blood flow by putting pressure on it,” Sayid said searching through his bag.
“Its bleeding?!” Charlie said shocked,
“Yes Charlie, that’s what usually, happens when you get hit on the head with a few rocks,” Greg said. Charlie was in too much pain to be hurt by Greg’s words as Sayid pushed the towel on Charlie’s cut.
“Now push that hard onto the cut, it may hurt but it will stop the bleeding,” Sayid said as he let go of the towel and Charlie took over.
“Animal, Who is she….? Ow!” Charlie said,
“She is Rousseau and she was trying to stop us from reaching her and I must say she has done a bloody good job of it thanks to Cant-keep-hands-to-self here,” Greg said
“Well then why don’t you go?” Charlie said,
“Good idea Charlie but I just know that if I try to make my escape to get my son back Sayid is going to shoot me with that priest’s gun,” Greg said sarcastically,
“Go, I think I can trust you not to blow her brains out. But remember she has done it for a reason and is mentally ill. You must be gentile with her,” Sayid said,
“I can only promise you that if she hasn’t already killed or handed over my son. Because I am getting Aaron back, no matter what,” Greg said and he jumped up and rushed off towards the black smoke.

Greg bursts through the forest and reaches a beach. There is a small black fire burning in front of him and it is emitting a black smoke.
“This is it? This is what everyone has been so scared of, A DAMN FIRE!” Greg says throwing a hand full of sand over the fire. The fire crackles but doesn’t go out.
*Where is everyone, where are these so called others, where is Rousseau, could she have started the fire?* Greg thought.
“Have you come to kill me and take the baby back?” a voice said from Greg’s left. Greg turned to his left and saw Rousseau emerge from the forest with crying baby.
“Nope I have come to ask you nicely for my son back so that I can take him home to his mother. If you refuse and get violent that’s when I shoot you,” Greg said edging forward.
“They weren’t here,” Rousseau said almost saddened by it.
“The others?” Greg said, Rousseau nodded and said,
“I heard them whispering, saying they wanted the boy, so I brought them him hoping they would give me something they have back. Greg didn’t say anything. Instead he edged towards Rousseau. Rousseau noticed this and moved around Greg so they were circling each other like lions ready to attack each other.
“Have you heard them whisper?” Rousseau said stopping and watching Greg as he gave up trying to catch her.
“Yes I have,” Greg answers,
“What do they say?” Rousseau asks listening intently,
“They talk about a boy, about them wanting to get the boy but they don’t specify who the boy is. When Aaron was born I was scared that they boy might be him and made sure that I always stuck by Claire because I knew that something or someone would try and take him.” Greg answers,
“Is that why you followed me? Because you knew that I was going to take him?” Rousseau asks but Greg shook his head and said,
“I only knew that you were up to something but I didn’t know what.” Greg said and he stepped forwards and to his surprise Rousseau didn’t move.
“I just wanted Alex back,” Rousseau sobbed,
“I know but you should do it this way. You are taking my son away from me. Do you remember what it was like to be so long without Alex. Well you are inflicting that on to me and Claire now. We re going to be without a son because you wanted your daughter back.” Greg said trying to get Rousseau in a state of awareness and make her feel that what she was doing was wrong.
“I just wanted Alex back,” Rousseau repeated. Greg stepped forwards until he could almost reach out and touch Aaron.
“I know, but Alex wouldn’t want you to. She saved Claire and Aaron from the others so that she could come back to me and so that Aaron would be safe. Don’t you think she would want you to give him back to me and Claire?” Greg asks Rousseau nods and Greg holds out his Arms. Rousseau places Aaron in his arms and wipes her tears away.
“Thank you Rousseau,” Greg said smiling warmly at her. Rousseau gave a quick smile back but then asks
“Alex, you have seen her haven’t you?”
“Yes I have,” Greg answers
“How is she, is she ok,” Rousseau asks,
“You have a beautiful daughter Rousseau, and if she is anything like you, then she is safe and she is smart. I hope you find her soon Rousseau,” Greg said and he walked past her just as Charlie and Sayid burst through the jungle with Guns ready to see that no one was there.
“Where is everyone?” Charlie asks,
“It’s all just a set up by Rousseau to get Aaron off us,” Greg said,
“Where is she now?” Sayid asks,
“She just over…….” Greg starts but pauses after he turns around and realizes that she has vanished.
“You got Aaron back!” Charlie shouts with happiness.
“Yes I did, but I want you to take him back to Claire, and make sure you tell her that I got him back.” Greg said rushing past them,
“Where are you going now?” Sayid says grabbing Greg’s shoulder.
“I have a hatch to blow up,” Greg says rolling Sayids hand off his shoulder and bursting through the jungle.

Greg rushed through the forest hoping that he wouldn’t miss the fireworks but he suddenly heard someone shouting,
“Stop, the numbers are bad, stop it!” Greg came to the conclusion that someone was in trouble so started to run again to the source and came across Hurley trying to stamp out a detonation cable to some dynamite on the hatch door.
“Damn it Hurley!” Greg said charging for Hurley who didn’t even turn around. Greg rugby tackled Hurley and the two of them went rolling into some bushes. Greg turned around and saw the Dynamite strip had almost gone so he held his hands over his head to block the boom of the dynamite. Hurley did the same just as the cable ran out and the dynamite exploded. Greg and Hurley could feel the heat of the blast behind them. The almighty boom shook the ground and popped Greg eardrums. After Greg’s ears stopped ringing Greg got up and stepped out of the bush.

Greg Walked up to the hatch along with Chris, Jack and Locke and they all peered down it. It seemed to go on forever into an eternal pit of blackness.
“Now that’s how you open a door,” Chris said his voice echoed down the shaft.

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Ummmm....very large. But very good! Wow.

I hope you do some more....

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Oh my god! That was AMAZING blitz! Definitely one of your best episodes yet!!! You can tell a lot of hard work has gone into this!

I can't wait until the season 2 fanfic!!!

Well done Blitz!

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Thanks, i will repost "Man of faith, man of science" So it follows on but i will be working on adrift next.

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Here is the episode, “Man of faith, man of science” the edited version. Even if you read it before it would be good if you could read it again because there are some new bits in there, enjoy.

Man of faith, man of science

Jack, Locke, Greg and Chris are staring down the hole, they are puzzled to what’s down there and Locke wants to find out,
“I’m going down there jack,” Locke said,
“No, your not Locke, we’ve opened the hatch, lets just leave going down it for another day.” Jack insisted,
“He’s right John, your not going down……I am,” Kate says,
“Before anyone goes down they should look at this, because I can tell you this, anyone who wants to go down will seriously be put off going down once looking at this,” Greg said showing then the hatch door, the door said “Quarantine” on it. They stared at it for a few minutes and then locke said,
“I’m still going down,”, Greg took the door and threw it to one side before going back to camp to tell Claire he was going to baby-sit Locke.

At camp jack has called all the survivors to have a word with them.
“We have opened the hatch, but we won’t be going down until tomorrow,” Jack said,
“By tomorrow we could all be dead!” a man shouted
“And what do you know frogurt man; you sell froguet for a living,” Charlie said
“Why you….” Neil said about to punch Charlie, Suddenly 3 gunshots were heard booming through the sky, they all turned around and Greg had a gun in the air with fire residue coming from it,
“You are all so, stupid, because as long as I’m here Neil, I’ll kill every son of a b**ch that comes within a foot of this camp,” Greg said, Neil let out a smirk and then said,
“Ow and how are you going to do……” He started only to be silenced by 3 more shots that were fired into the air. Greg then marched up to Neil who steped back until he was against a tree. Greg stood close enough to see the fear in Neil's eyes.
“You see that blond girl over there?” Greg asked,
“Claire,” Neil managed to force out.
“Yes Claire, she’s the only one of the whole lot of you, ‘Survivors’ that I think is worth protecting, so I would count yourselves lucky that she’s here, or…….” Greg started,
“Greg i know you care alot about me but Neil has done nothing wong ,” Claire said, Greg looked at Claire and then stepped away from Neil.
“Dont pick on Neil because your angry at me,” a young English woman said, Greg turned around to see Rachel,
“I’m stating facts, if I weren’t here, you would all have died,” Greg said,
“You want to place a bet on that,” She said,
“Well Rachel you’ve got guts, but you don’t have my power so I suggest you back off” Greg said,
“Oh yeah,” Rachel said throwing a punch. The punch caught Greg right in the jaw.
“You b**ch!” Greg shouted he then realigned his jaw and said,
“You punch like Anna Lucia,”
"I dont know who she is and i dont care, if you have a quarrel with me then you should take it out on me and mot inocent people" Rachel said,
"I thought i could trust you Rachel, i really did, but you let me down. So i think its safe to say tht i am the only one on this god forsaken island that can protect Claire. So just back off Rachel!" Greg shouts silencing Rachel. Greg then turns to Claire and says,
"I am going to the hatch, i have a job o do," Greg then gave Rachel a glare before heading off to the hatch.

At the hatch Greg couldn’t see Kate or Locke but he did find a piece of strong wire heading down into the hatch. Greg knew that Locke would go down the first chance he got and so Greg would have to go down and save both Kate and Locke. Meanwhile in the hatch, Locke has just typed in the numbers and him and Desmond were talking when Desmond hears a noise,
“Be silent brother,” Desmond said to Locke as he moves towards the periscope. Desmond adjusts the periscope and looks into it, he see’s Greg heading towards the room they were in and Desmond get ready for him,
“Is he one of yours brother?” Desmond asks but then Greg appears and looks at them.
“Well, well, what’s happening here, who are you both?” Greg asks,
“Greg, it’s….” Locke starts but Greg shook his head signalling that Locke shouldn’t breathe a word.
“Do you 2 know each other?” Desmond asks,
“Would I a loyal Australian scientist know a……” Greg started needing help from Locke,
“A box manufacture……” Locke started,
“Are you serious, my god,” Greg said, almost laughing,
“A scientist you say?” Desmond asks,
“Yeah from an institution called……..Dharma,” Greg lied,
“Really, what did one snowman say to the other?” Desmond asked,
“Smell’s like carrots,” Greg answered,
“Its you,” Desmond said, Locke was totally confused as to how Greg had known the answer, but Desmond was ecstatic to see Greg.
“Welcome brother,” Desmond greeted Greg,
“Thanks……” Greg started,
“Desmond,” Desmond finished,
“Thanks des, mind if I look around?” Greg said,
“Of course not, take as long as you want brother,” Desmond said. Greg went walk about around the hatch and found the food store, he could hear banging on the door,
“Who have you got in here?” Greg asked, knowing that it was Kate,
“it’s the other one,” Desmond said,
“Can I talk to them, I might find something out about them?” Greg asked,
“Sure, go head,” Desmond said throwing Greg the key. Greg unlocked the door and saw Kate, he shut the door and said,
“ Hello Kate, you have really annoyed my good friend Desmond haven’t you,” Greg joked,
“How did you get past him?” Kate asked,
“I didn’t, I answered his little joke and he now has full trust in me,” Greg said,
“How did you know the answer?” Kate asked,
“It’s a well known Australian joke, What did one snowman say to the other?” Greg asked,
“I don’t know,” Kate said,
“Smells like carrots,” He said, he smiled at the joke but Kate wasn’t impressed,
“Can you let me out?” Kate asked,
“Sorry Kate but if I do that, des is going to think something is happening, its best that you go through the vents,” Greg said boosting Kate up into a vent. When Kate was in Greg spotted some Apollo bars, he grabbed one and started to eat it before walking out and locking the Food store door.
“I hope you don’t mind I was hungry,” Greg said to Desmond,
“No, not at all brother,” Desmond said back. Suddenly Desmond heard another noise and again looked in the periscope and saw Jack,
“Who’s this brother?” he said to Locke,
“Oh that’s Jack, our doctor,” Locke answered,
“And what’s your Doctor doing with a gun?” Desmond asked,
“I’ll go check him out,” Greg said walking out of the room. He saw jack and Jack saw him,
“Oh Greg its you, where’s Locke and Kate?” He said,
“What are you doing here jack?” Greg said in a slight whisper,
“I’m here to see what was happening,” Jack said,
“Having trouble brother?” Desmond shouted,
“Who’s that?” Jack asked,
“Just shut up and follow my lead, I’ll explain all later,” Greg said putting a gun to Jacks head,
“What are you…..” Jack started,
“Just keep walking,” Greg said. Greg lead jack into the room and Desmond and him saw eye to eye,
“Hello brother,” Desmond said,
“I’m going to teach Jack a thing or 2 about knocking before entering,” Greg said leading jack into a room,
“What’s going on Greg?” Jack asked,
“Ok, here’s the deal, Desmond, the guy in there thinks I’m some scientist guy and has total trust in me, I have freed Kate but he still has Locke, so I need you to play along until Kate comes and I don’t know, hit Desmond or something,” Greg explained,
“How did you get him to trust you?” Jack asked,
“He asked me a question and I answered it,” Greg answered,
“What was the question?” jack asked,
“What did one snowman say to the other?” Greg said, before jack could say anything Greg said, “Smells like carrots, its an Australian joke now move Jack,” Greg said leading jack out of the room,
“Who is he brother?” Desmond asked,
“He says he’s a survivor from a plane crash, along with 40 more including Locke and Kate,” Greg said, Desmond was confused at why Greg knew there names but then Kate hit him over the head with a gun and he fell to the floor, shooting the computer on the way down. There was a deadly silence and then Desmond said,
“What have you done?” the computer was damaged and if they didn’t fix it Desmond feared that it would kill them all.[/

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AWESOME!!! TOTALLY AWESOME!!!

Once again, you've excelled yourself!!! You should be proud!!!! 9/10!!!

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9/10? lol only joking i know i cant have 10/10 all the time. that was actually adrift and man of faith, man of science all in one. i was watching adrift yesterday to get a feel of it and realised that they whole episode was just kates side of man of faith, man of Science. I am working on Orientation and it should be finished soon. Soon being today or tomorow.

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Nice one, blitz!!!! Loved it!!!! Good to see you're keeping the standard just as high this season, lol!!!!!!!!!

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well i'll be changing alot of my season two episoes but they will be better i promise you that.

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That's all I could ever hope for!!!!!!!!!!! Wink

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Yep! Can't wait until "Orientation"!!!

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Blitz, what sort of rate do you think you will be churning out your fanfics at?? It's just that I want to cover season 2 with the transcripts (Meaning I still need to do "One Of Them" and "Maternity Leave" to do, then I'll be safe after that), but I've also been having a lot of ideas for my next few fanfics too, so I'm wondering how quickly you think you'll get through season 2?

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You dont have to churn out transcripts because of me sawbucks. i have the Dvd's and can use them. you just do whatever you want to do, i wont be done for a while so by the time i get to where your transcripts are you would be really far on your own fanfics. I havent even got half way through Oreientation and with all the other fanfics (Well one other fanfic) i write I wont be done for a while.

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Oh, that's OK then! I'll get cracking on the fanfics then!!! Very Happy

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Good i look forward to reading some of them, i will gladly go without sleep and food until i have read every one you post unless its monday or thursday night Wink

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Very well! No food or sleep for you! Full steam ahead!!!

Out of curiosity, why not Mondays or Thursdays?

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Worst days ever, on monday i have 2 business lessons with a teacher who sings but cant sing and tells us to try and complete an entire project by the end of the day and on thursday i have no breacks or frees its just full steam ahead an hope by the end of the day my head isnt pounding like a drum. of course it doesnt help me having to shout over the music in the common room but meh what can you do?

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Well, that's life, I guess! I'll try and avoid those days if I can help it!!! Very Happy

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well dont avoid them on my account. I was just warning you that if i dont read you fanfics its because of those day and the fact that my head is so sore that i go partly blind.

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I know the feeling only too well...

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Orientation

In the hatch Jack has a gun pointed at Desmond who is on the floor after being hit on the back of the head by Kate. Desmond was staring at the computer which was sparking after he accidentally shot it as he fell.
“You have to let me up, I have to fix it,” Desmond said
“What the hell is he talking about?” Jack said looking at both Locke and Greg who both shrugged.
“Listen, if you do not let me up then we are all going to die,” Desmond said,
“Yeah and if we let you up then your going to shoot us all, lets see what would I prefer,” Greg said, Desmond struggled to get up but Jack pushed the gun on Desmond’s back and said,
“Stop moving or I swear to god…..”
“Look at the wall, you see that, that is a timer and it’s counting down. I have to enter the code; I have got to push the button!” Desmond Shouts worried about the button not being pressed which was stressing him out.
“Or what?” Greg said stepping forward and looking down at Desmond,
“Jack, you should let him up,” Locke advises
“Don’t tell me what to do!” Jack shouts at Locke and the turn back to Desmond and looks him in the eyes and says, “…..Or what’s going to happen?” Desmond did say anything but stared at Jack for a few seconds and then said,
“Do I know you?” Locke looks at Jack suspiciously as Greg ponders the possibility of it actually being true.
“You got him Kate?” Jack asks Kate who nods as she holds a rifle at Desmond. Jack lets Desmond up who rushes straight to the computer and curses,
“B*****d!” Jack looks at Locke who is still surprised at what Desmond said,
“What?” Jack asks
“Nothing, Jack” Locke answers.

Greg watches as Desmond rushes around throwing books off the shelves as if he is looking for something.
“I don’t think you need that Kate,” Locke says,
“I think Locke’s right, what ever this Desmond guy is doing the last thing he is thinking about is killing us,” Greg says, Locke looks surprised at Greg. Greg wasn’t normally the king of guy to trust a complete stranger but Locke lost all concentration when a book landed at his feet.
“Whatever you are looking for, maybe I can help,” Locke said to Desmond as he threw books off the shelf.
“Can you fix a computer?” Desmond asks but Locke half shrugs and half shakes his head. “Then you can’t help me, Can you?” Desmond asks quite angry at this stage obviously because he couldn’t find what he was looking for.
“Sayid can fix a computer,” Kate said,
“Sayid can fix almost everything and since you were the one that thought it up you can go fetch him,” Greg said smiling at Kate.
“Can you go back up the rope?” Jack asks,
“I wont have to, there’s got to be a front door to this place,” Kate said
“Down the Corridor to the left. Be persistent, it sticks,” Desmond said not stopping searching on the shelves. Kate rushes off down the hall way followed by Greg. Greg finds Kate struggling with the door.
“Need a hand,” Greg says watching her struggle with the door,
“I’m, fine,” Kate says,
“Ok,” Greg says back and leans against the wall. Kate stops trying to twist it and turns around and gives Greg a look almost like she expects him to open the door. Greg walks over to the door, grabs it with both hands and twists the wheel as hard as he can. The wheel suddenly jerks and becomes easier to twist. Greg spins it until it opens the door which Kate rushes through,
“No Problem!” Greg shouts after her pointing out that she forgot to say thank you but Greg gives up and follows her outside.

“Yeah Kate wait up!” Greg shouts as he chases her through the forest. Greg then spots something that catches his attention, a woman with blood running down the left side of her head.
“I am not waiting for you if you are just going to stand there!” Kate shouts back, Greg turns to her and says,
“You go on I have something to do,” Greg says turning back to the women but she isn’t there. Fear start to take over his body as he swears to have known her but he doesn’t remember where. He carries on running to the beach after Kate hoping there was something there to take his mind off the woman.

Greg reaches the beach and sees Kate talking to Sayid. Hurley spots Greg and walks over to him,
“Is this true, you found a computer down that hole thing?” Hurley asks,
“As far as I know yeah it a computer but I am not sure what it does,” Greg answers and spots Chris,
“What do you mean you don’t know what it does?” Hurley asks as Greg runs past him,
“Well look at it this way, it is ether saving the world or doing F**k all!” Greg shouts as he turns to face Hurley before he rushes off towards Chris.

“Hey, Chris!” Greg shouts as he rushes towards Chris,
“Hey Greg, sorry I couldn’t come exploring in that hatch with you,” Chris apologises,
“That’s ok you would have wanted to, the welcome wasn’t at all welcoming,” Greg chuckled, Chris just smiled and continued fishing.
“So what is down there? I heard you mention a computer to Hurley,” Chris asks,
\”Yeah but I didn’t mention the guy we found down there,” Greg said,
“What guy!” Chris said turning to Greg with an excited look on his face like the look children get at Christmas.
“Some Scottish bloke named Desmond. You don’t know him do you?” Greg asks,
“What you think all Scottish people know each other?” Chris asks a bit annoyed that Greg would think such a thing,
“No I just though it would be weird if you did, almost as weird as if Jack knew him,” Greg said giving Chris a signalling wink.
“Are you serious, Jack knows him?” Chris asked curious,
“Well Desmond sure thinks he knows Jack,” Greg said,
“Now that is weird,” Chris says
“Hey once Sayid is done fixing the computer that supposedly is saving the world then why don’t I take you down there, there is some gym equipment w could use, I sure need a good workout, I haven’t done much exercise since we arrived here,” Greg says prodding his arm for signs of muscle.
“There’s a Gym in the hatch!?” A women shouts, Greg looks towards her and sees that its Rachel,
“What do you want?” Greg asks coldly,
\”Look I am sorry for not protecting Claire but Rousseau is strong, she even outmatched…….” Rachel starts,
“You don’t want to finish that sentence,” Greg threatened stepping forward so that his face was inches away from hers.
“Calm down, look I am sure Rachel is sorry Greg, cant you just leave it. You got Aaron back didn’t you?” Chris snaps, Greg nods and Chris continues, “well then we should learn to live together before we die alone,” Greg the looks back at Rachel who is upset by Greg’s outburst,
“I’m sorry too; I shouldn’t have been so annoyed at it. Chris is right, if we can’t live together as one then we might as well go off on are own and die alone with no one there when we do. Friends?” Greg says holding out a hand but Rachel goes for a hug and hugs Greg who is shocked at the change of heart.
“Now about this Gym?” Rachel asks, Greg smile and says,
“This way,” And he leads them into the forest.

Greg I leading Chris and Rachel through the forest towards the hatch. Chris is looking around frantically trying to figure out where they were.
“Where are you taking us Greg?” He asks,
“To the hatch, why don’t you trust me?” Greg asks back,
“It’s just that we aren’t heading towards the hatch, we should have made a right a few meters back,” Chris said obviously well aware of where the hatch is.
“You don’t trust me do you Chris?” Greg asks, Chris just gives Greg a glare and then says,
“I have already said I trust you but you aren’t taking us to the hatch,” Chris says getting quite frustrated with Greg,
“Very well Chris, why don’t you go back and go down that hole but when you get to the bottom me and Rachel will already be in there helping our selves to the Apollo bars,” Greg said
“So there’s another way into the hatch then?” Chris asks. Greg points into some bushes which Chris goes through after much pondering and comes face to face with a huge metal door.
“Welcome to the Swan,” Greg said twisting the wheel and opening the door to Chris and Rachel.

Once inside the hatch Chris and Rachel seemed stunned at what they were seeing. The hatch was like a military bunker. The walls were damp and there were pipes’ running along the ceiling carrying god knows what around the hatch. As they walked down the hall the sound of repeating bleeping could be heard echoing along the corridor.
“That is that sound, what does it mean?” Rachel said quite discomforted by the noise.
“it means that the computer isn’t fixed,” Greg said rushing own the hall followed by Chris and Rachel. Greg came to a grinding halt and marched into the computer room to see Locke and Jack arguing as the timer continued to count down. Chris and Rachel slowly came into the room and both looked up at the timer that had reached 50 seconds.
“What’s going on, have you fixed the computer?” Greg asks Sayid,
“Yes but Locke and Jack are arguing over who should push the button.” Sayid answers,
“What?!” Greg said surprised that even they could argue over something as life threatening as this.
“Locke wants Jack to push the button but Jack wont push the button,” Sayid explains,
“Fine if they won’t push the button then I will,” Greg said stepping forward and reaching out for the button but Locke grabs his arm and stops him from pushing it.
“Stop, this is Jacks leap of faith, he must be the one that does it,” Locke says,
“In……20 seconds we may not find out if Jack does push the button. Jack just push the button……..NOW!” Greg shouts. Jack looks at Greg and then at Locke who says,
“It’s a leap of faith Jack, you must make the jump,” Jack stares at Locke for a while whilst the timer counts own from ten, Greg tries to get his hand free but Locke has it tight. The timer counts down, 5…..4…..3…..2….1. Jack pushes the execute button just as the timer reaches 0. The timer stops and it resets itself to 108 minutes.
“I shall take the first shift,” Locke says letting go of Greg’s hand that immediately punches Locke in the face and off his chair.
“Your days of playing god are over John, don’t do that again or I swear to god I shall play a bit of being god of my own!” Greg shouts at Locke who is laid on the floor before Greg stands up straight and matches out of the hatch.

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Nice one, blitz! I really enjoyed that! And it will be interesting how Greg, Chris and Rachel react to the Swan station in the next few episodes!!!!! Very Happy

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Yes but there is another story that is going to build up to The other 48 days which will blow peoples minds but be sure to see how they all react to the hatch.

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Sounds exciting! I can't wait!!!!!!

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I shall have a quick read of "Everyone hates hugo," and then write it but i have a pritty good storyline for it alkready in my head, i just need to add the detail that connects the fanfic to the episode.

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As you do...By all means, take as long as you like! I'd rather you took longer and made it more detailed and whatnot, than rushing it!!!! Very Happy

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Well this episode is quite important, you should check through it carefully because there are some stuff in ther that will make ther things make a hell of alot more sense. BTW tell me if i am right about Chris's sister.

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Well, I would, if I could find the episode!!!!

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Lol sorry i posted that but then just forgot about posting the actual episode but here it is.

Everybody hates Hugo

Greg was dragging a huge blue tarp across the beach when he spotted Charlie and Hurley talking about the Hatch. Greg dropped the tarp and rushed over to them.
“I’m sorry! I must’ve confused it with the 900 trillion I am worth myself! And this baby’s made of chocolate lollipops, so if you’ll excuse us, I’m going to flap my wings and fly off this island!” Charlie shouted at Hurley,
“I hope you are not calling my son a chocolate lollypop there Charlie, and whilst your off the island can you grab me a few cans of Fosters, I haven’t had a decent bit of alcohol for ages,” Greg jokes,
“Ow piss off!” Charlie said storming off down the beach.
“He is just angry because Claire wouldn’t let him go for a walk with her,” Greg said,
“So why aren’t you with her?” Hurley asks, Greg paused and then said,
“She……eerrrrm, she, she wouldn’t let me go with her ether, she likes a bit of her time now and then,” Greg then said, “So you didn’t tell Charlie what’s in the hatch then?” Greg asks changing the subject,
“Nope I didn’t. He wouldn’t believe me anyway,” Hurley said,
“Well Charlie’s an idiot. I know your telling the truth,” Greg says,
“What really?! You believe me?!” Hurley shouts happy that someone finally believes him,
“Sure heck someone’s got to win the lottery,” Greg says Hurley smiles and then says,
“So what is in the hatch because I don’t think I even know what that thing is?” Hurley asks, Greg signs and says,
“If I am honest with you Hurley I don’t even know what that computer does, all I know is that whatever it is, it is the real deal,” Greg says walking back to the tarp.

Greg reached the spot on the beach where he had already collected a few other bits and pieces and he lay the tarp down.
“Hey Greg!” someone shouted, Greg turned around and saw Rachel running up to him.
“Hey Rachel, have you seen Chris?” Greg asks,
“Yeah he is on hatch duty, why?” Rachel asks back,
“I wanted him to give me a hand with something,” Greg says,
“Well maybe I can help,” Rachel hints. Greg smiled and says,
“That was the idea, it kinda is a three man…..or in this case a 2 men and 1 women job,” Greg said walking to the hatch.
“Wait where are you going?” Rachel shouts,
“To the hatch, I want you to stay here and guard the stuff!” Greg shouts back,
“Wait aren’t you going to tell me what all of this stuff is for?!” Rachel asks,
“It’s a surprise, just guard it ok!” Greg answers and continues to run into the jungle.

Greg reached the hatch ‘Front door’ and opens it. He then walks down the corridor towards the computer room where Chris was sat at the computer.
“Yo Chris, do you mind giving me a hand with something?” Greg asks,
“Can’t you see I am on hatch duty?” Chris asks, Greg obviously knew that Chris was on hatch duty but pushes for Chris’s help anyway.
“Ow come on Chris, cant you get someone else to push the button,” Greg said trying to convince Chris to help.
“No, Kate told me to do it,” Chris said not taking his eyes off the screen even though there was only the marker there where the numbers would go.
“So how longs your shift?” Greg asks,
“Well I only have to push the button once more,” Chris said, Greg looked at the timer hoping it was just about to start beeping but his heart sank when he saw that it was on 103 minutes,
“Fine I will just wait,” Greg said folding his arms.
“Your not going to wait here for an hour and 40 minutes until I push the button are you?” Chris says looking at Greg,
“Of course not, I am not that sad. I am going to use the gym equipment and then take a shower. Then I expect for your services ok Chris,” Greg said without even waiting for an answer.

Greg searched the record rack for some music. All of it was a bit old for his generation but he found an old favorite that his parents used to listen to and put it on. The record was Downtown by Petula Clark which Greg put on and jumped onto the bicycle. Greg started to peddle furiously and continued for 10 minutes before he got tired and decided to slow his pace down. After 5 minutes he then started his furious peddling for 10 more minutes then grabbed some water. Greg then used 2 5 kg weights and did a fully workout with them including punches, bicep curls and chest presses. After 20 minutes of exercising with them he took a rest and thought he should cool down on the rower. Greg did 5 minutes on the rower before he grabbed a book off the shelf and started to read it. He found it rather interesting but he needed to take a shower. So he put the book down and turned the shower on before getting into it.

In a flashback Greg is in a boxing ring with someone else. Both are wearing boxing helmets, Greg’s is red and the other guys was blue.
“BOX!” The referee shouts. The 2 boxers circle each other before Greg signals for the other boxer to attack him. The other boxer didn’t hesitate and came at Greg with a right hook. Greg caught the punch with his left block and he then countered with 2 right jabs that caught the other boxer by surprise. The other boxer attempts to block his left side but in doing so leaves his right side open which Greg takes advantage of with a left jab followed by a right hook to the left side of the boxers face. Then Greg outboxes the poor guy with a bombardment of jabs followed by 4 jabs right, left, right, left and then a powerful left uppercut that catches the boxer on the chin and sends him stumbling back.
“Time out!” The referee shouts and both boxers take off there helmets, and shake hands,
“Good fight Chris,” Greg says shaking Chris’s hand,
“Thanks Greg, I really enjoyed that although I was on the end of most of those blows,” Chris chuckles,
“Well you should predict your opponent’s moves more, make him really think and don’t get caught by counters, you shouldn’t even get countered if you let them attack first and counter them before unloading all you have on him.” Greg said,
“Thanks, I’ll remember that for next time,” Greg’s police colleague says.
“Well done Greg!” Congratulates a small, slightly muscular man,
“Thanks coach,” Greg says stepping out of the ring.
“You know you should turn professional,” Greg’s coach said,
“Nar, boxing isn’t for me, I am just here so that I can use what I learn on the scum of Sydney,” Greg says,
“Well watch out scum, Greg is coming,” the Coach chuckled, Greg smiled but his smile faded as he sees a woman watching him.

Back in the hatch Greg was still in the shower,
“How long have I been in here?” Greg asks himself. He quickly jumps out of the shower and grabs a tower. After he had dried himself he got dressed and went back into the gym area. It seemed like Chris was done and he was using the gym too.
“So you work out?” Greg asks,
“Yeah I would need to if I was to be a professional football player,” Chris said,
“I didn’t know you played football,” Greg said surprised at Chris,
“Ow yeah I was one of the best, until I got injured, that’s when I decided that my footballing days were over and that I would have to find some other form of work, which is why I was in Sydney.” Chris explains, Greg is a bit shocked so Chris continues, “it’s a shame about the hick from the beach to the hatch though, I would like to use this equipment without the huge hick before it,” Chris says,
“I think I have a solution to that,” Greg says giving Chris a grin as if he had a plan.

Greg and Chris are walking through the jungle carrying an exercise cycle.
“So we are going to make a gym on the beach?” Chris asks still not believing what Greg told him.
“That’s the idea,” Greg said,
“So you told Rachel to guard the stuff?” Chris said running through the plan again,
“And to start construction. It’s not going to be anything fancy just a tarp floored space with a roof to keep the rain out. We are going to move a cycle, the rowing machine and a few weights to the beach so we can use them easier. I have made sure to leave some stuff behind for the people in the hatch to use but we need somewhere were we can exercise Chris and I for one am tired of waiting,” Greg explains,
“Wow, you have really thought this through haven’t you?” Chris asks
“Yep, it took me a few days to plan it out and collect the stuff but it will be all worth it I……” Greg starts but is distracted by a figure standing in the bushes a few meters away. It was a woman; the same woman Greg saw a few days ago and the same woman who watches him box. She still had the blood running down the left side of her head. Greg swore he knew her from somewhere but he couldn’t think where, his mind was blank.
“Greg, Greg?!” Chris shouts, Greg looks at him and asks,
“What?”
“Are you ok you seem distracted?” Chris asks, Greg was distracted, by the girl but he preferred not to tell Chris about it and so said
“Its nothing, lets take this o the beach,” And they set off carrying the cycle to the beach.

On the beach Greg was surprised at how much work had been done. It seemed everyone wanted to help and they had already put the tarp floor and roof up and were starting construction on some gates an even a heavy bag.
“Wow, Rachel, this is amazing, how did you get all this done?” Greg asks,
“Well I mentioned it to a few people and well they really wanted somewhere to exercise. I think they were scared of the sea because of what happened to…..” Rachel starts looking over Greg’s shoulder at Chris.
“Its ok Rachel, it’s not like me and her were married or anything, you can say her name,” Chris said annoyed that Rachel would try and avoid it because of what he and Joanna had before she drown.
“Sorry I was just sparing your feelings, I know how much you cared for her,” Rachel said,
“Yeah well don’t, I don’t need people bypassing her in conversations just because we were quite close.” Chris said.
“As much as I hate to break up this lovely conversation about Joanna I would like to get all the stuff from the hatch today if you don’t mind Chris,” Greg said, “Ow and Rachel could you come with, I have some weights I need bringing down,” Greg said before him and Chris headed back to the hatch.

After days of planning and a few hours of trailing back and forth to the hatch for the equipment they had finally finished. The Beach now had a gym complete with a exercise cycle, Rowing machine, heavy bag which was a cloth full of sand in a tear drop shape and some weights. It also had enough room so people could do some push ups and sit ups too.
“Well, what do you think?” Greg asks,
“I think……..I get the first go on the cycle,” Rachel said rushing to the cycle and jumping on,
“I guess that means you like it” Greg chuckled but his smile faded as he spotted Chris throwing pebbles into the sea. Greg decided to see what was up with Chris and see if could cheer him up.
“Hey Chris, mind if I sit down,” Greg said standing next to Chris who was sat down throwing pebbles at the sea.
“Sure,” Chris said and Greg sat down. There was an eerie silence before Chris said, “You know this is what took her away from me,” Chris said pointing at the sea,
“Look what happened to Joanna I told you its not…..” Greg started but was interrupted by Chris,
“I wasn’t talking about Joanna; I was talking about my sister.” Chris said coldly
“You mean the woman you kept seeing in the jungle, the one that lead you to my father’s gun?” Greg asks but Greg just got a nod from Chris. Chris finally comes out with,
“Laura, my older sister, she drown when she was eighteen year old. I was fifteen at the time. Watching Joanna drown brought it all back because she was like a sister to me, like Laura was,” Chris said as tears trickled down his face,
“Listen Chris, I know this is probably a bad time but I found this in the jungle and I thought that I should give it to someone I truly trust,” Greg said holding out a black 12 mm handgun. Chris started at the gun for a while and then said,
“Why are you giving me this?”
“Because Chris, earning someone’s trust can take years, or it can take minutes. Me and you have been up and down for a while, some days I feel like punching you in the face but other days I feel like I want to do something for you. Here is a peace offering for everything I have done to you and I hope that we can forgive and forget,” Greg says, Chris gives Greg an awkward look, “Ow to hell with it do you want the damn gun or not,” Greg said coldly Chris smiles and says,
“That’s the Greg I know. Yes I do, thank you,” Chris said taking the gun,
“No problem,” Greg said standing up,
“Wait, you have seemed distracted all day, what is up with you?” Chris said almost as if he really cared,
“Nothing, just a white Rabbit,” Greg said smiling and walking back down the beach towards his tent.

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That was excellent, blitz!!!!! I really enjoyed it! I hadn't really decided how to make Chris' sister die, but having her drown doesn't contradict anything, so it's all good!!! Very Happy

And I like that you hinted that Chris sees the hatch duty as being important: He's gonna be very involved with the hatch in my fanfics (If I ever get that far, lol)!!!

PS I'm slightly freaked out: I had a couple of Tennents before, and I decided to go down and get another can of beer before reading this, but there was no Tennents left in the fridge, only Fosters. And no ssoner had I settled down with that Fosters when I read Greg saying he could do with a Fosters!!! And, as if that wasn't enough, I've got the Windows Media Player running as I'm on here, playing Lost songs among others, and "Downtown" was actually playing at the time I was reading that part of your fanfic! It was very scary, lol!!!!!!

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Lol great minds think alike. Wow that super freaky, Fosters is an Australian beer and downtown is the only record i would think to be in the hatch apart from "Make your own kind of music". i am glad you liked it but i have no idea what to do for "....and found so it might be a while until that comes up.

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Hey, no worries! A little break away from writing to think things through carefully can often be the best thing for you!!! Well, at least that's the excuse I use for the month-long gaps between my fanfcis, lol!!!!!

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Lol well i shall make sure i have a great storyline for it and i shall have it done and i shall read through it and then post it. But as long as you are not expecting it any time soon then thats fine.

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Oh, no, you know I appreciate them however long you take to write them!!! Very Happy

Besides, I've got my work cut out for me, what with juggling fanfics and transcripts, so it's not like I'm sitting here with nothing to do BUT read your fanfics! Though I'll definitely make time to read them when there's a new instalment!!!! Very Happy

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Well i have thought of the best storyline for it and it builds up my big suprise episode later on. I will read through "......and found" Later today and then try and fit my storyline into it before i start to write it.

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Glad to hear you've thought of a storyline!!! I look forward to reading "...And Found"!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy

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Sorry Blitz! I've only just read this, but I must say, IT WAS AWESOME!
Definitely one to be proud of!!!

I can't wait until "...And Found"

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Thats ok, i am half way through ".....and found" now and will get it up by the end of the day.

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that's excellent news! i'm sure it'll be great!

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well one things for sure, its bloody long. i wont be suprised if it becomes 7 word doccuments long.

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well it must be good!

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It is, i promise that you will be as suprised at how it pans out as i was for thinking up such a weird idea for a storyline.

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Sound's great! Can't wait!

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Here it is at last, WARNING! some of the scenes in this Fanfic may be disturbing and violent, Read at your own risk and i am not responsible for any nightmares that you may encure if you read any bit of the fanfic. I hope you enjoy it without haveing nightmares afterwards.

……….And Found

Greg was in his tent trying to calm Aaron down whilst Claire turned the tent upside down in an attempt to find some clean dippers,
“I know I had some left somewhere,” Claire said searching through all the bags.
“Don’t worry Claire they will turn up. Here you take Aaron, I shall go look for some. Maybe Charlie has some,” Greg said handing Aaron over to Claire and going to Charlie’s tent which conveniently was right next to there’s. Charlie was sat outside strumming his guitar.
“Charlie do you have any Dippers?” Greg asks,
“Sure,” Charlie said not looking up from his guitar as he continues to strum.
“Well can I borrow some its kind of an emergency?” Greg said,
“Sorry did I here a please in there somewhere?” Charlie said,
“Charlie I don’t have time for this,” Greg said but Charlie continued to strum. Eventually Greg gave up and said, “Please ca I have some clean dippers,” Charlie then stopped strumming and went inside his tent and got some fresh nappies an handed them to Greg and said,
“I am only doing this for Claire,” Charlie said handing Greg the nappies,
“Well good, at least we have something in common,” Greg said taking the nappies and heading back next door to his tent.

“Did you get them?” Claire asks,
“Yes but don’t make me do that again, talking to Charlie is like…..” Greg said pausing to think of something really horrible,
“….Being stung by millions of jellyfish,” A man chuckled, Greg turned around and saw Chris standing in the door way.
“Hi Chris,” Claire said,
“Morning Claire, couldn’t help but notice Aarons adorable screeching and baling,” Chris said,
“Sorry about that mate, if Charlie would have co-operated more then we would have stopped Mr smelly from crying ages ago,” Greg said,
“Well that’s what happens when you try and talk to people that have a serious grudge against you.” Chris says,
“Very true, so what brings you here Chris,” Greg says Chris chuckles and says,
“You don’t miss a thing do you?”
“It’s my job not to miss things like that,” Greg says back smiling.
“I was wondering if you wanted to go to the gym with me, its quiet there now but I don’t think it will be for long.” Chris said,
“I wish I could mat but I was going to baby sit Aaron whilst Claire had a break and socialised,” Greg said,
“I do socialise,” Claire said,
“With anyone except porcupine Pace,” Greg said,
“What’s wrong with Charlie?” Claire asks,
“I refer you back to a comment Chris made about talking to him was like being stung by millions of Jellyfish,” Greg chuckles,
“You may find it funny but I am sure Charlie wont,” Claire said quite disgusted,
“Actually Claire it’s kind of funny,” A voice said from behind Chris. Chris stepped to one side to reveal Charlie standing in the doorway.
“Ow great, so you truly can’t get any privacy on a beach. I trusted you Charlie to move next to our tent. But if you are just going to eavesdrop then I don’t think I want you living there,” Greg said annoyed that Charlie would eavesdrop on there conversation.
“Wait a minute, you were talking about me! I think I have a right to be in a conversation about me!” Charlie shouts,
“I don’t think you do Charlie, unless you want to share with me all the things you have been saying to Claire about me,” Greg said
“What I don’t know what you are on about?” Charlie asks,
“Ow really, ok fair enough but Charlie I though you should know that I have been there and done that and Claire knows already,” Greg said standing up and marching out of the tent.
“You already knew and you didn’t think to tell me,” Charlie said,
“Its none of your business Charlie, he was sick. And anyway he had gone through a lot what with his ex-girlfriend shooting herself in front of him. His parents and grandparents dieing and me and him weren’t exactly going too well ether,” Claire said angry at Charlie for trying to use something like that against Greg.
“I know but he should have been locked up in a mental institution for a long time, don’t you agree?” Charlie said. Claire was too disgusted to answer and instead got up and walked out of her own tent. “What? What did I do?” Charlie said chasing after her.
“Greg was right about you Charlie, you have some weird twisted grudge against him and if that is the case then I don’t think we should be friends,” Claire said marching down the beach holding Aaron. Leaving Charlie to ponder on what had just been said.

Greg and Chris were walking down the beach talking.
“What’s wrong Greg? You seem troubled,” Chris asks, Greg sighs and says,
“When you saw your sister, in the jungle, what did she say?” Greg asks. Chris pauses for a minute just to get it right in his head and then said,
“She didn’t say anything, she just stood there. Why?” Chris asks.
“No reason. So your sister, did she have brown hair?” Greg asks,
“No but what’s with all of the questions about my sister,” Chris asks slightly annoyed that Greg was infecting old wounds. Greg could see that Chris was angry and stopped walking. Chris stopped too and they both sat down on the beach. Chris then says, “Look, you have been distracted lately. I don’t know whether it’s the hatch and the button or what is going on with you and Charlie but you have to talk to me about it.” Chris says. Greg ponders on the idea and then talks to Chris about what he has been seeing.
“I have been seeing someone in the jungle. At first I though the heat was getting to me but I kept seeing her.” Greg starts,
“Her? You think it’s my sister don’t you?” Chris asks, Greg shakes his head and says,
“I don’t know who it is but I swear I have seen them before. In the real world, I saw her then. Usually at the gym in Sydney or at my office on late nights but she was there watching me. I didn’t take much notice of it but now it has gotten worse. All I want to know is who she is and what she wants with me,” Greg said burying his head into his knees and sobbing a little. Chris was stunned at what Greg had just said but tried to comfort Greg by saying.
“Look, Greg. What you are saying wouldn’t have made sense if I didn’t see my deceased sister in the jungle. You won’t be able to forget about it so the best thing to do is to face it head on.”
“But how, I don’t even know who it is,” Greg said.
“The best thing to do is search your mind for the answer. And there is one way that I can help you with that,” Chris said grinning as if he had a plan. Greg looked at Chris confused and was slightly put off by the grin Chris had.

“Locke!” Greg shouts as he runs through the forest but there was no answer. Eventually Greg stops and sits on a log. He remembers a saying that says “The best way to find something is to stop looking,” So Greg heeded the advice and waited for Locke to find him.

After waiting for what seemed like 30 minutes Greg heard a rustling from the bushes to his left. Greg stared at the bushes for a few minutes and then shouts,
“Who’s there?” By the got no reply and the rustling stopped. Greg turned away from the bushes but as soon as he did the rustling started again. Greg jumped onto his feet and pulled out his knife. He then walked slowly towards the bushes.
“Its you isn’t it? The women that has been haunting me for years. Who are you?” Greg asks but he got no reply. Greg then charged into the bushes and grabbed someone who he pinned to a tree and put the knife at there throat.
“Greg?” The figure said. Greg looked at who he had pinned to the tree and he realised it’s the very person he was looking for. Locke.

“Jesus Christ Locke, what the hell were you playing at spying on me from the bushes? I could have killed you!” Greg shouts furious as he lets Locke down.
“I’m sorry, I though you were one of them.” Locke says.
“If I was then you wouldn’t be alive right now.” Greg said walking away from Locke.
“Wait, don’t you want to speak to me? You were calling my name,” Locke asks,
“Ow yeah I need to ask you something,” Greg answers,
“Ok but I want to ask you something first,” Locke says,
“Fine, fire away,” Greg says back.
“This woman you thought I was, who is she?” Locke asks, Greg felt as if he had been punched in the face. He wasn’t expecting Locke to ask that and was rather embarrassed at answering him.
“I don’t know who she is, I was hoping you could help me find out,” Greg answers. Locke looks at Greg puzzled at how he expects Locke to help him find out who she is.
“And how would I be able to help you find out who she is?” Locke asks.
“Chris told me about some paste you have that can make people have visions. I would like to try it and see if it can help explain who she is,” Greg said.
“No,” Locke said,
“No?” Greg asks trying to figure out what he meant by it,
“I will not let you use the paste,” Locke answers,
“WHAT?!” Greg shouts annoyed that Locke had just smashed the only plan the made sense in millions of pieces.
“Its too dangerous, god knows what could happen to you. Heck I don’t even think god knows. You could hurt yourself our worst hurt someone else.” Locke said disgusted in the idea.
“Come on Locke. I need you to do this for me. For 2 years I have been haunted by her. 2 years and then when I finally though I got rid of her I land on this bloody island and she appears again. I need you to help me find out who she is and what she wants so I can fix it!” Greg shouts. Locke thinks about it and then says.
“Ok but we do it somewhere safe. Go back to my tent. The paste is in there.” Locke says,
“Thank you,” Greg says and turns around to head to Locke’s tent. But as he does he is hit over the back of the head and falls to the floor, unconscious.

When Greg wakes up he is still in the jungle but is tied to a tree. He see’s Locke mixing something in a bowl.
“What did you do that for?” Greg asks angry
“I’m sorry but I had to tie you up so you didn’t kill yourself, or worse,” Locke’s says,
“What’s worse than killing myself?” Greg asks,
“Killing someone else,” Locke answers,
“Fair enough, but you didn’t have to knock me out. You could have just told me that you were going to tie me up,” Greg says,
“I find it easier to do it with you unconscious.” Locke says walking over to Greg with the bowl.
“Is that the paste?” Greg said trying to see what was in the bowl.
“Yes it is, I am going to put it over the wound. It will heal the wound but will also make you see things. You ever had magic mushrooms?” Locke asks but Greg shakes his head. “Well it’s like that, you will start to hallucinate but I swear that nothing will hurt you. Are you sure you still want to do this?” Locke asks,
“I have to find out who she is,” Greg answers,
“Very well,” Locke says putting the paste onto the wound.
“I will be right here watching you just In case things get out of hand, Now close your eyes and relax. The effects won’t take long to kick in.” Locke says sitting down on a log whilst Greg closes his eyes and relaxes.

Greg didn’t know whether the effects had kicked in or not as he was still tied to the tree.
“Locke?” Greg shouts and opens his eyes but Locke wasn’t there. “Is this it, is it all just some game?” Greg thought to himself but his concentration was lost when he heard birds flocking from the trees in front of him. Greg wondered what was going on but he was answered by a thunderous roar that was only emitted by one thing Greg knew, the monster.
“Ow crap,” Greg said frantically trying to get himself free. “Get a grip of yourself Greg, Locke said nothing can hurt you and it’s all in your head.” Greg told himself but the furious roaring of the monster was too real to forget. Greg could hear it clunking and clanging like a machine. Greg stared into the trees in front of him waiting for the trees to be ripped out of the ground. But there was nothing. No sound, no trees being uprooted, no nothing. Greg could only hear his heavy breathing. Greg knew never to trust eerie silences as a sign of it being over but he couldn’t help feeling relieved that the noise had stopped. But his relief was shattered by the furious noise of the monster and as Greg looking into the trees he could see them being plucked out of the earth like vegetables at harvest. Greg squirmed and wriggled trying to escape but it was too late. When he looked back into the space where the tree’s used to be his eyes met with a swarming cloud of Black smoke. Greg stared into the black smoke for minutes before plucking up the courage to say.
“You know who she is don’t you. I can see her in you as if you are trying to remind me of who she is but you can’t quite do it. Who is she? TELL ME!” As Greg said this the smoke backed away as if it was afraid. “No don’t go, tell me who she is now,” Greg said again but the smoke continued to back away. Greg hung his head, he was so close to finding out who she was yet so far. Suddenly Greg felt something warp around his body. When Greg looked up the monster had come back and had grabbed him. Greg felt glad it came back, but this feeling only lasted a few seconds before the smoke ripped Greg off the tree and threw him through the forest. Greg landed on his front which hurt him really bad. It was like the smoke was punishing him for demanding that it tell him who she is. Greg turned on his back and looked in the direction in which the smoke monster had been when it threw him but it wasn’t there anymore. Greg looked around frantically but there was no sign of it anywhere. Suddenly Greg’s legs were grabbed by something and before he could see what he was being dragged through the jungle by his legs.

Greg tried to grab tree roots and rocks but he was moving too fast to grab ether. Greg managed to turn around and see what was dragging him and he wasn’t too surprised to see the monster dragging him though the forest with a tendril. Greg however was surprise to see a hole appear from nowhere and see the smoke monster disappear down it. All Greg could do was close his eyes as he too was dragged down the hole. Greg yelled loudly as he felt himself freefall down the huge hole. He couldn’t feel the smoke monster have a hold of him anymore but he was now falling down a huge hole he didn’t even know where it led.

Greg suddenly felt himself fall on his back on something hard although the fall didn’t seem that great now as it didn’t hurt as much as the fall would have been. Greg looked around and saw that he was no longer in the jungle; he wasn’t even on the island. He was in a building but not the hatch, more like an office.
“Are you going to lie there all day or are you going to do your job?” A man shouts angrily at Greg. Greg turns his head to face the man and it was his super intendment from Sydney police department. Greg forced himself up and looked around. His chair had fallen over which meant he had fallen off it. “Was it all a dream? The island the plan crashing? Was it all just something Greg’s mind had made up when he fell of his chair and hit his head?” He looked around his office. He could see Chris working on some paperwork. He looked out of the window and he could see that he was in Sydney.
“What’s wrong Greg? Everyone would have though you have been to another planet,” The super intendment said.
“It sure felt like it,” Greg said turning to the SI
“Well hurry up and get on with your work, you have the world to save,” the SI said nodding at the computer on Greg’s desk. Greg was confused by what he meant by ‘You have the world to save’ but forgot about it and sat at his desk and looked at the computer screen. As he did his heart skipped a few beats and his pupils shrank as he tried to believe what he was seeing. His computer screen was completely black with a green marker that was flashing. Greg knew what he had to do he just couldn’t believe it.
“Why is this here? Why is the swan computer in my office?” Greg asks himself. Suddenly an alarm sounded the same alarm that went off in the hatch. Greg looked up at the wall and saw the timer counting down. It was currently on 004:52. Greg started to type the numbers in, 4, 8, 15…but as he did he checked the timer and was horrified to see that it was counting down at an unassailable speed. Greg frantically tried to type the numbers in but was halted by something grabbing his waist. He looked down and saw a smoky tendril wrapped around him. Greg was then ripped from his desk backwards off his chair and through the huge windows behind him. There was a smashing sound of a window breaking as he was pulled through it. Then he was let go by the smoke monster again and started to free fall to the bust streets bellow. Greg shouted and screamed as he came close to the pavement and then as he was about to hit it there was a huge bright light. He then hit the ground but it wasn’t the pavement but sand.

Greg Again had fallen on his front and this time felt like he had fallen from a greater height than off his office chair. He struggled to push himself up and looked around. There was nothing on the beach. He new it was the island beach but there were no tents, b=no people, nothing. Then Greg spotted a tent, his.

He hobbled towards it clutching his side in pain and peered inside. There was hardly anything inside it, no suitcases, no beds, nothing but Aarons cradle. Greg then heard a baby crying which was coming from the cradle.
“Its ok Aaron, I am here,” Greg said reaching own and picking up the baby which was completely covered in a blanket. No part of his body could be seen but Greg could feel he was there. As Greg rocked him however he suddenly felt the hard heavy baby become lighter and not so solid. The blanket rolled off Greg’s hands to reveal them covered in blood.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!,” Greg shouts looking at his hands and falling to his knees. He sobbed into his blooded hands; he didn’t once think that it wasn’t all real, it felt too real to say otherwise. Greg then heard a voice calling him. He quickly got to his feet and rushed outside o see Claire running down the beach shouting,
“Greg, Greg!”
“CLAIRE!” Greg shouts rushing over to her. They both met and hugged each other. This felt totally real to Greg but how was he going to explain to Claire that there son had just melted into a puddle of blood.
“Claire I am sorry,” Greg said,
“No I am sorry,” Claire said back,
“What for?” Greg asks but he was silenced when Claire exploded in a see of blood which splattered over Greg’s body. His arms fell to his side but he didn’t speak or scream or shout. He just stood there thinking of what sick fantasy he had wound up in. Was this hell? Was he dead? Was this the smoke monster punishing him or was it building up to telling him who the woman is. Greg could think or say anything, not after what he had just seen. It was like his dreams only his dreams weren’t as strong as this nor did they ever get as sick and violent as this. Tears ran down Greg’s face as he started shaking. His whole body trying to force out what had just happened, trying to explain what was happening. Greg heard a thunderous noise from the sky. Greg looked up not knowing what to expect and saw a plane, not just any plane however, his plane, there plane, flight 815.

Greg watched as the plane flew through the sky with smoke emitting from it. Then the plane was ripped in two by an invisible force and pieces shattered off it. The cockpit flew further away from the middle and landed in the jungle behind Greg. The tail spiralled off to the right and disappeared behind some trees before it hit the island and the middle hurtled towards Greg. Greg didn’t move, why should he? He didn’t even know whether it would kill him. Even if it did it he had nothing left, he had watched his son and Claire just…..die. Shrapnel fell onto the beach and the sharper shards stuck into the sand. Greg hear a whistling and looked back up at the plane to see a huge sharp shard of metal whistle towards him. “Go on, kill me! You have already taken everything else from me!” Greg shouts as the metal headed straight for him. He didn’t close his eyes or hold his breath he just wanted it to be over. But as the shard was just about to hit him everything went black.

When Greg woke up he opened his eyes and he was back in the jungle tied to the tree. Locke was carving something when he saw Greg was awake and he went over to him,
“Greg are you ok, what happened?” Locke asks
“Just untie me,” Greg said he was still white as a sheet and shaking. When Locke untied him Greg rushed of into the woods and was sick behind a tree. When Greg came back to the clearing he was still quite pale but looked better until he realised what was waiting for him in the clearing. Locke wasn’t anywhere to be seen in the clearing. Instead there was the woman, who Greg kept seeing.
“You,” Greg said stepping closer to the woman but she ran off into the jungle as he did. Greg chases her through the jungle but she was really fast. Greg tried to run faster but he tripped over a rock and flew through the air and landed in a clearing.
“Damn it, of all times!” Greg cursed and punched the ground. He then looked in front of him and saw something shimmering just in front of him. He reached out and grabbed the object and saw that it was a necklace. Greg seemed more shocked at finding the necklace than whose it was, in fact he already knew who’s it was. This triggered a few memories in his head and stood up and studied the necklace,
“So its you,” Greg said grasping the necklace tight and for once throughout the entire day smiles. Suddenly a horn tooted and when Greg turned to face where the noise had come from he saw a car come out of the forest and hurtle towards him, It knock him off his feet and unconscious.

Greg then woke up tied to the tree again. Locke was carving something except this time Greg didn’t feel sick. Locke spotted that he was awake and rushed over to him and cut him loose.
“Are you ok? What happened?” Locke asks,
“You lied, that’s what happened,” Greg said quite angry at Locke,
“Why what did I lie about?” Locke said confused,
“It hurt,” Greg said checking himself over for bruises but surprisingly he found none.
“No you though it hurt,” Locke said looking own at the necklace in Greg’s hand.
“Where did you get this?” Locke asks,
“It was hers, I know who she is,” Greg said heading off into the jungle, leaveing Locke utterly confused over the whole thing.

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All I can say is.................WOW!!!

What an amazing episode! So much hard work has gone into this.
The bit where he didn't care if he died because claire and his child had "died" was brilliant! It had a real impact!
I do understand why you put your warning at the beginning!

Well Blitz, I think that "...And Found" has got to be up there with "Exodus" as one of your all-time greats!
9/10!!!
Well done!

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Thanks but its all in a days work *Buts hands behind head and leans back in chair*

I am glad you think the warning was nessesary, i dont want little children getting nightmares because of what my imagionation can throw up.

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I know what you mean!

Well you should feel very proud Blitz! I'm impressed!

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I must admit that i was impressed on a number of occations

1. I could think of a storyline for it at all
2. I could think of suck a gory storyline
3. I could type for 5 hours straight
4. I could impress you
5. i could even get to 5 reasons why i am impressed

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Well you're certainly impressed!!! Lol!
You deserve to be though! A truly great installment!

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Wow, blitz! I don't know if there's anything I can add, 'cos Ben seems to have covered it all, but this truly is one of your best episodes so far!!!! Very Happy

I'm even considering letting you off with using my personal "Day's work" catchphrase without my permission... Wink

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Lol i am glad it took 30 fanfics until i was finally allowed to use the catchphaise. I am glad you liked it Sawbucks.

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It was brilliant!!! Just make sure you don't use that catchphrase again!!!! Wink

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I'll try but its such a catchy catchphaise that i dont think i can avoid the.................catchyness

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Well, I suggest catching a way to avoid the "catchiness". Otherwise, you'll need to catch a plane to some place far away from me! Or you could always stay here and let your face catch my fist...I'll stop now...

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Yes i think you should. Dont worry, i will be suprised if you can even find Greetland on a map and actually reach me.

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Oh, I'll manage. They don't call me Straw-Hat for nothing, you know!!!!!!

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I know they dont........They do call you staw hat because you used to work part time as a scare crow right?

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No, of course not! It was because I once got lost in a shopping centre (I was eight at the time) and I managed to make my way to the trolley park and waited on my parents coming out!

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any idea when the next episode will be up Blitz?

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Depending on whether i get FF12 in the weekend and whether i can finish my work from home fast enough. Probably thursday as it is my day off and i should get alot done then.

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Cool!
Though I would recommend buying FF12!

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I look forward to it, whenever it arrives, blitz! Very Happy

I'm currently juggling between "Raised By Another" and "All The Best Cowboys Have Daddy Issues" at the moment, 'cos they's sort of like two parts of a bigger storyline...And I'm sure you all give damn about that! Very Happy

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Well as "Raised By Another" is a claire episode, why not go for that?

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Yes, I've written more of that at the moment, but I'm thinking of waiting until I've done both before I post them. They're so closely linked that if I decide to change something in one, I'll probably need to alter the other one too!!! Very Happy

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Ah, well! Fair enough!

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well i hope i get to see them soon.

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Yeah, I'll try and get them finished as soon as possible! I want to get them done before...other writing commitments begin taking up my spare time!

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I wonder what commitments they could be? lol!

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Blitz, do you know when your next episode will be up?
I'm starting to miss your amazing work!

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Lol thanks ben but I am half way through "Abandoned". it is a hard one to do because "the other 48 days" is straight after it but the losties (Including Greg) wont be doing anything for a whole episode because its one big flashback so i have to change the storyline of "Abandoned" So that Shannon is Shot after "The other 48 days". and although "Abandoned" starts at night i dont know whether it carries on throughout the night or whether they go to sleep and wake up the in the morning.

Apart from all that i have it pritty much covered so it should be up before if not on friday.

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Yes, it goes onto the next day. It's actually still daytime when Shannon is shot, just cloudy and rainy. Hope that helps!

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Yes it does, it helps alot. thank you Sawbucks. although it is two days over the course of Abandoned i am going to make it 3 days over the course of abandoned and The other 48 days.

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All sounds good to me!
Can't wait!

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Me neither! Very Happy

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The pressure is on Blitz!
Lol! Just kidding! Very Happy

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Lol no it is good to here you all so excited about the episode. It pushes me to push my movie to one side to write the next chapter.

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Well, don't feel too pressured, blitz! If you wanna give the movie your attention for now, don't hesitate to do so! You know we will be waiting patiently for the next chapter of the fanfic, even if we have to wait 6 years! (Ben's already used to it with waiting for my fanfics anyway, lol) Very Happy

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i know but its not just you guys who want to finish this chapter. i do too because the next few chapters will be the best ones to write but i also want to finish this video but there is still alot to do on the video whilst my fanfic is half way through. So i am pushing myself to finish the fanfic for friday so i can have the weekend to do what i can to this video.

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Well, it's up to you what you do first, obviously!!! Just don't try and do too much!!!

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Dont worry, i dont do much anyway, It will be fine now i have dropped one of my fanfics for someone else.

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Fair enough! Now I advise you waste no more time talking to me, and go and do something useful with your time! Your fanfics and video are far more worthwhile than sitting keeping me company!!!!

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I would if i could but the fact is i dont think i can concentrate as much as to do anything more than talk to you.

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Er...I don't know if that's insulting or not, lol!!! Wink

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relax, all it means is that i wouldnt want to make a mistake on my fanfic or my video which i will regret tomorow. and besides talking to you doesnt take that much brain power, which is why i like it so much. Very Happy

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Er...That's not the most reassuring thing you could have said there, but it at least makes me feel good that it's pretty relaxing to talk to me, lol!!!!!!!!!! Wink

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Ow sure i could have lied and said that we have such intelectual onversations that make my brain work like mad all the time but that not how i like my conversations and thats not the kind of conversations me and you have.

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Definitely not. Especially when I go to the toilet and let my gerbil post for me until I get back! Very Happy

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Is that when the sensible stuff is posted by you or is your gerbil the evil one that i have been talking about singapur about? Laughing

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No, I'm the Singapour one. The sensible stuff comes when my gerbil also needs to go to the toilet, and I put a brick on the keyboard. The gerbil mostly covers the transcripts. Wink

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Ah so the brick is the sensible one?

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Very much so. Ain't that right, Lord William Tarquinn Smythe? *The brick nods* Wink

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Well then you need to get a sladge hammer and smash that brick into a small powder that can be inhailed by hobbits with asma for disobeying the laws of the funny one

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Yes, no one can escape the wrath of a pufferfish high on life!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy

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Lol anyway after watching Par avion i am having thoughts about how the hell i am going to get around the fact that Claire and Charlie are getting closer and i had a thought aboutstarting my fanfics again with a different charicter (With the same name, its special to me the name) but a totally different story. that way Charlie and Claire can o what they want and my charicter wont interfere with them too much. Plus my fanfics may be better the second time around. So guys what do you think? I will leave this Thread alone so that i can come back to it but i want to change my charicter and the storyline he brings to lost.

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It's up to you, but I will be very upset that there won't be any more episodes in this thread!!!!

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There might be, if my other fanfics dont work out but i will be useing a similar storyline to these fanfics except Greg wont be in love with Claire. He wont even know her or the baby. They will still have Chris and Rachel in and this Greg is still a cop but he is more detecive than cop so he wont be as adventurous as the greg in these. Also he isnt Australia but english which will give Chris, rachel and Greg more to talk about. this way i can keep the charicter bios untouched (Claires baby is Thomas's, Charlie falls inlove with Claire) and i am not forcing Charlie away which will get alot more complicated later on in the season.

Plus these episodes will seem alot more realistic and less like Greg being the center of all things. Trust me, if you liked these episodes then you will love my new ones. I am in the middle of the pilot part one and it should be done by the end of the day.

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It better be!!!! *Shakes fist in threatening manner*

Lol, only joking. Take your time making it perfect, blitz! First impressions, and all! Wink

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Trust me, you will love the pilot episode so much that i asure you that you will want to read more, even if you dont read my fsanfics.

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Abandoned

Greg is laid in his bed, unable to sleep. He thought that knowing who the women was would be enough to put his mind at rest, but the things he saw when he used Locke’s paste were haunting his every thought, not just his dreams. Suddenly Greg’s thoughts vanished as he heard someone scream, a women. Greg sat up and looked at Claire who was stirring next to him. He stood up and walked out of the tent and looked in the direction he thought the scream came from.
“I thought you would be the first to investigate,” someone said behind Greg. Greg turned around and saw it was Chris who was carrying the gun Greg had given him.
“If you knew I was going to investigate then why did you come too?” Greg asks quite grumpy since he had had little sleep leading up to the scream.
“I am your backup, three guns are better than two, right?” Chris says, Greg smiles and says,
“You know, you saying that reminds me of someone I used o know,”
“Who?” Chris asks
“Just a work colleague,” Greg answers.
“Used to know? So that means you don’t now,” a woman said from behind Chris. Greg peered over Chris’s shoulder and saw Rachel.
“Great now we have the third member of the Ghostbusters lets go bust some ghosts,” Greg said sarcastically
“Yeah, The Ghostbusters was one of my favourite films so don’t make fun of them!” Chris snaps
“Sorry, but why is it that whenever some happens we end up being the ones that investigate it together?” Greg asks,
“What so you would rather go after some screams, in the dark, by yourself?” Rachel asks slightly annoyed,
“Ow just forget it and lets go,” Greg said walking down the beach,
“Wait!!! You didn’t answer my first question,” Rachel says halting Greg,
“Let’s just say that you had better hope that Chris doesn’t suffer the same fate as he did,” Greg said peering over his shoulder before carrying on down the beach, followed closely by Chris and Rachel.

Greg, Chris and Rachel rush to the aid of the women and find themselves running towards a very fancy looking tent.
“Wow that’s a good tent, it’s even better than yours,” Chris said looking at Greg,
“I am going to let you off with that one because you are right, it is a fine tent,” Greg said walking closer to it and checking it out.
“Guys, can you stop falling in love with a tent for a second and actually get back to the task in hand,” Rachel says, Greg and Chris glare at her and then here a woman shout,
“Yeah, Yeah you three!” The three of them turn around and see Shannon running towards them,
“Yeah Shannon, were you the one that screamed?” Rachel asks,
“Yeah it was but listen, have you seen Walt anywhere around here?” Shannon asks,
“Walt? Didn’t he go off with the raft?” Greg asks,
“Yes but I have been seeing him in the jungle but Sayid wont believe me,”
“And I think he is right,” Chris says, Shannon turns to him and says
“What?!”
“Yeah, Sayid is a smart man and you should listen to him, plus you have been going through a lot of stress what with Boone and all,” Rachel says, Shannon looks away disgusted at them both and turns to Greg expecting an answer.
“I don’t know what to believe. I wont even try to believe Sayid but what gets me is why Walt?” Greg asks,
“I don’t know but I can see him and if you won’t believe me then I am just wasting my time!” Shannon shouts and storms off to the tent.
“Shannon wait!” Greg shouts but she wouldn’t want to listen to him even if she could.
“So do you believe her or not?” Chris says confused by Greg’s answer,
“I do but I don’t want her to get hurt by it. Some things are best left alone. I have found that out the hard way too many times to see someone else get hurt by it,” Greg says and turns around and heads back to his tent.

On the way they meet Sayid who looks like he was looking for something.
“Have you seen Shannon?” He asks,
“Yes right before she stormed off back into that fine looking tent. Did you build it?” Chris asks,
“Yes, it was supposed to be a romantic spot for me and her but it has turned into a nightmare. Has she told you that she saw Walt?” Sayid asks,
“That’s why she stormed off,” Rachel answers,
“Ow so you don’t believe her ether?” Sayid asks looking at all three of them in turn.
“We can’t all be so naïve Sayid. You of all people should know that,” Greg said angrily and stormed down the beach at a quickened pace towards his tent.

As he got Close to his tent he could see Claire sitting outside. But the closer he got the worse he felt as he could see that she was upset about something. Greg rushed towards his tent to see what was up with her and whether there was anything he could do for her.
“Hey Claire, what’s wrong?” Greg asks standing in front of her.
“Nothing, really I’m fine” Claire sobbed obviously not fine with something.
“Ok well you have a bit of nothing running down your cheek there,” Greg said reaching towards her check and wiping the tear away with his thumb. “Now are you going to tell me what’s up or am I going to have to go all detective on you?” Greg asks. Claire knew how good Greg was at finding stuff out, especially when it involved her. He would find out soon anyway so she had no choice but to tell him.
“Do you think I am a bad mother Greg?” Claire asks wiping away more tears. Greg was shocked by the question especially when it was coming from Claire.
“Quite the opposite, you’re the best mum I know. Why who has said otherwise?” Greg said thinking of all the things he will do the person who put such ridiculous thoughts into Claire’s head.
“Promise me you won’t do anything bad to them if I tell you,” Claire said. Greg suddenly dropped all thoughts of all the stuff he would do to the person and sighed
“Ok Claire I promise,” Greg said grabbing hold of Claire’s hands which were shaking slightly. Claire knew that Greg wouldn’t hurt the person. She knew he was telling the truth.
“Charlie…….” Claire started
“I KNEW IT!” Greg said standing up really fast and clenching his fists,
“You promised you wouldn’t!” Claire screamed predicting Greg’s next move before he did it.
“I am sorry Claire, please carry on, I will stick to my word. No more lies.” Greg said sitting back down and calming down.
“When Shannon screamed I wanted to investigate but I didn’t want to leave Aaron alone so I woke him up so that I wouldn’t have to leave him on his own. But when Charlie found out that I had woken him up then he went mental and started shouting at me and saying that I shouldn’t have woken him up and that he would be up all night and…..” Claire before she started to cry again. Greg Grabbed he hands again and said.
“Claire, Charlie isn’t a father. Most importantly he isn’t Aaron’s father, but I am. You shouldn’t even listen to what he has to say. What can he know that you don’t? Sure maybe he was right but I always have been a fan of letting other people take the consequences of there actions and well if he knew that Aaron would be awake all day and night now then he should have let you deal with it. If he is so bothered about it then I shall look after Aaron.” Greg said standing up.
“Wait so are you saying that I should have paid for caring for my son?” Claire said quite angry at that part of Greg’s speech.
“No Claire, I think everyone should. But I didn’t mean it like that. I meant that he shouldn’t be looking after Aaron if he is annoyed about having to look after Aaron. It totally contradicts what he shouted at you for and it’s wrong. What he should have done was leave you to sort it out since you are Aaron’s mother. Learn from your mistakes. I bet you won’t do it again will you?” Greg asks Claire shakes her head, still slightly angry at what Greg was implying. “Good but I am sorry if I caused you any offence I just think that drug dealers should take the consequences of taking drugs, Joy riders should take the consequences of joyriding and first time mums should learn from there mistakes so that they can become better mums. I can tell you that if I would have just had people telling me what’s right and wrong instead of me actually learning for myself what’s right and wrong and learning from my mistakes then I wouldn’t be very good at my Job.” Greg said before kissing Claire on the forehead and standing fully up again.
“I guess that makes sense but does this mean that you are not going to help me if I do make a mistake?” Claire asks,
“Of course I will Claire, but you must not let anyone else tell you how to look after your own son. Its not like Charlie is Aaron’s father or anything right,” Greg said.
“That’s what I said; I said he shouldn’t tell me how to look after Aaron because he isn’t even his father. Heck we hardly even know each other. He is practically a stranger,” Claire says,
“Yes he is anyway I think I am finally tired and after the night I have been having I deserve a couple of hours kip.” Greg said going inside the tent to sleep, shortly followed by Claire.

When Greg awoke the next morning he was surprisingly refreshed. He jumped out of bed and the first thing he thought of doing was going to talk to Claire about last night. Obviously he was going to stick to his word, he didn’t want to become Claire’s enemy but still Charlie had to know what Greg thought about it. Greg found Charlie taking Aaron for a walk along the beach.
“Hey Daddy wanna-be!” Greg shouts. Charlie turns around and the funny face he was pulling at Aaron turned sour as he saw Greg approach.
“What do you want, no wait I know, you have come to hang me from a tree or maybe you have come to beat me silly, well you wont hit a guy with a baby will you, especially since its yours,” Charlie said smugly,
“Charlie I haven’t come to beat you up, I have come to ask why,” Greg said,
“Why?! Why what?” Charlie said
“Don’t play dumb with me Charlie. Last night, you called Claire a bad mum,” Greg said not in the mood for Charlie’s cheeky and sarcastic remarks.
“No I didn’t!” Charlie shouts outraged that Greg would say such a thing.
“Ok maybe not exactly like that but that’s how Claire interoperated it like,” Greg said,
“Well I certainly didn’t mean it like that. Not one bit,” Charlie said,
“So what are you doing with Aaron?” Greg asks,
“I didn’t want Claire to have to suffer his fussiness all night and day,” Charlie said. Greg stared at him for a while and then said.
“Your lying,”
“What?!” Charlie shouts,
“Your lying. You took Aaron because you knew that Claire wouldn’t be angry with you if you had Aaron with you. Then when she has calmed down and Aaron has calmed down as well you can just hand Aaron back and make out like it was all her fault,” Greg said getting angry just thinking about it.
“No it wasn’t like that!” Charlie shouts,
“So what was it going to be like Charlie, because you wouldn’t be annoyed with Claire for waking Aaron up and then walk off with Aaron just so Claire wouldn’t have to look after him.” Greg said
“I have had 4 hours sleep, I have a thumping headache and am partially deaf, I don’t need nor want a lecture from you about what I should have done with Aaron ok,” Charlie said making out to be the victim,
“Well at least something good came out of tonight then, and if you are so bothered about it then I will look after Aaron,” Greg said,
“What?!” Charlie said, both surprised and annoyed that his plan would be ruined.
“You heard me, I want to look after Aaron,” Greg said reaching forward for his son.
“Why?” Charlie said drawing back with Aaron.
“Charlie I don’t need a reason to look after my own son,” Greg said moving forward again.
“You will just give him back to Claire,” Charlie said knowing that Greg would just give him back to Claire.
“No I won’t, because I am heading in this direction,” Greg said pointing in the direction Charlie was heading, the opposite way to where Claire actually was.
“I will walk with you then,” Charlie said,
“I thought you said you had a headache, and anyway you have to apologise to Claire, and no more lies ok Charlie, or I will give you something to be sorry for,” Greg said before he marched off down the beach with his son in his arms.

As Greg walked he thought less and less about Charlie and more and more about Aaron and what the future had in store for them both.
“You know Aaron, I never thought about what would happen if I was to…….It just never entered my head that I would never get to see you grow up. But I want you to know this, you will always be my son, and no matter what happens I will always be with you. In this life or the next,” Greg said kissing his son on the forehead. Aaron squirmed and wriggled but then curled up tight in Greg’s arms and fell fast asleep. Greg smiled at him and then looked out to see with a sad look upon his face like he knew something that he wanted to tell the world, but didn’t want to suffer the consequences of his actions, not again.

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"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Excellent blitz! It made a nice change from running around killing people, lol!!!!! Seriously, though, that was great!!! Very Happy

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thanks sawbucks.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

I've been waiting for this for a while now and all I can say is...........ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!!!

It was an awesome episode! It was heart-felt and I really enjoyed it!
9/10!

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Thanks ben Very Happy

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

No problemo my good friend!

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