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is this where you post your like lost spin-offs and own lost episodes because i have loads that i would love to share.

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"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

great!!!

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Posted 22-08-06 17:04
heres my claire spin-off (if i dont get it done today then i wont get it done until friday becayse im recreateing previous lost eppisodes useing my made up charicter. you will find these episodes on "create your own eppy of lost" anyway here it goes.

Claire wakes to the sound of a crying baby. she had been having weird dreams about the island every since she was rescued a week ago. the publisity she got was intense but scary. she wondered every night when the vulters would quit bugging her. she looked at the alarm clock next to her bed. it was 2:00 in the morning, she heard the crying again and she tapped a figure who was sleeping next to her on the shoulder and said,
"honey, its your turn"
"ok" a groggy voice said getting out of bed and heading for the nursary. The figure came back with a very tiered baby in his arms and walk towards the balcony of his huge $300,000 house and cradled aaron singing "catch a fallin star".

aaron was soon fast asleep and the figure took aaron back to the nusary. when the figure returned claire said wiery,
"you've always been good with him, greg"
"i should hope so, after all, he is my son" greg answered. the word son echoed in claires head as she fell back to sleep.

in a flashback claire is at the local pub with boyfriend thomas.
"isnt it great claire," thomas asks
"what?" claire asks back
"that we're having a baby, together" thomas answers
"ye swell, listen thomas, i have something i need to say" claire says
"oh ye, i have something i need to say too" thomas says
"well can it wait cause this is kinda important?" claire asks
"no, i dont think it can" thomas answers
"ok, but make it quick" claire says
"ok, im dumping you claire." thomas says a bit too carmly.
"what!" claire answers stunned by what thomas ha just said. "why, thomas?!" claire says angrily.
"i found the DNA results claire, why did you lie to me" thomas says a bit less carmer now.
"what DN....." claire starts only to be interupted by
"DONT LIE TO ME CLAIRE, you know exactly what i mean, the results that show greg being the biological farther, not me!" thomas bellowed. the pub went silent, thomas feuming martched out of the pub slamming the doors open, almost breaking the glass windows.
"where are you going, thomas!" claire shouts after him. Claire knowing that its over between them kneels on the floor and start to cry.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Posted 22-08-06 18:01
Catch a falling star chapter 2:

Claire woke by a kiss on the cheek. she smiled then opened her eyes to see greg standing above her with his jacket and gun holdster on.
"morening, angle" greg complemented claire as she opened her eyes.
"do you have to go to work know, i thought we could snuggle for a bit" claire said weiry
"sorry claire, i have things to do, criminals to kill, you understand dont you claire?" greg asked
"ye, you go or you'll be late" claire answered, greg kissed her goodbye again and headed to his Vauxhal Madeina VRX and speed out of cliffside to the police station. Claire watched greg as he pasted the sign saying "cliffside" and then went to check on aaron. Aaron was fast asleep so claire went down stairs to make some breakfast. After claire had eatten her breakfast, had a shower and got dressed she was about to phone Rachael (one of her friends) when there was a knock at the door, she opened the door to find Thomas on the doorstep,
"hello, claire" thomas greeted
"WHAT THE BLOODY HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE!" claire yelled, suprised to see the man that left her with an unborn child.
"i came to say.....im sorry, im sorry that i left you in the state you were in..." thomas explained
"what you meen pregnant!" claire cut in.
"yes, we need to talk, can i come in?" thomas asked
"after what you did to me, you must be jokeing now go away thomas." claire said carmly
"but, claire im..."
"GET OUT OR I'LL CALL THE COPS!, i'll call them." claire thretend. thomas looked at her with pleeding eyes then turned around and headed out of cliffside. Claire started to cry and thought back to the last time thomas arived at her doorstep.

in a flashback Claire is reading a pregnancey magasin when she heard someone knock at the door. she put the mag down and headed to the door, she opened the door and saw her ex- boyfriend thomas,
"where is he?" thomas asked
"what are you...."claire started
"WHERE IS HE!?" thomas asked angrily
"get out thomas!" claire screamed but thomas advanced into the flat and pinned her to the worktop.
"i know he's here his car is outside" thomas said
"let go thomas!" claire screamed
"WHERE IS THE SON OF A B**CH WHO RUINED MY LIFE"
"HE'S NOT EVEN HALF THE SON OF A B**CH YOU ARE!" Claire screamed. thomas was very angry now and he grabbed her arm. she picked up a knife and stabbed him with it. she stumbled out of the flat and down the stairs.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Catch a falling star chapter 3 1st half:

It had been a month since they had got rescued from the island and the heat was still on claires back. every time greg came home he would try to scare them off by atemting to run them over with his car. He never hit any of them he would just scare them. He would then get out of the car and fire several shots into the air.
"why wont they leave me alone!" claire shouts, crying and trying to block out the thoughts of the island.
"i'll go pour some water over them" greg said getting a bucket from under the sink, filling it with water and pouring it over the balconey. they soon got the message and fled back to there news vans. greg went back down stairs and hugged claire who was realy in tears now.

After claire had calmed down and had forgotten all about the island greg went to change aaron. Sudenly the phone rang, claire rushed to the table next to the sofa and picked up the phone,
"hello, who is it?" claire asks
"its me, kate, kate austin"...

to be continued......

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Posted 23-08-06 14:43
lets pick up from where "Catch a falling star" left off,

Catch a falling star chapter 3 2nd half:

Claire, suprised by the unexpected phone call asks numerous questions that only the real kate austin would know.
"Whats your star sign?" claire asked
"Gemani, why?" kate answered suprised that claiore didnt belive her. Claire knowing that kates star sign was gemani carried on the questions,
"whats my son called?" claire asked being sure that this would catch her out,
"aaron, oh how is he?" kate answered,
"he's fine, one more question" claire started
"claire dont you belive its me, Kate, your friend on the island, the person who stuck by you, even when ethan captured you, the person who delivered your aaron!" kate said angry at the fact that claire didnt belive her,
"oh my god its you, your kate." claire said suprised that she was talking to claire.
"finally, now we're getting somwhere." kate mocked.
"how are you kate?" claire asked
"oh swell, im one the run from the law, had to flle to australia because the heat was too much and i've used my last quarter talking to the one person i thought i could trust and talking about f**k all." kate said angrily but soon calmed down. "listen claire i have a faver to ask, could you meet me in the walaby pub in 30 miniutes" kate explained
"sure i'll...." claire started
"and come alone" kate finished,
then kate hung up with claire looking amlessly at the phone.
"Who was that claire" said a voice behind her, she quickly slammed the phone down and said,
"my......mum....ye.....my mum just rang to see how i was." claire lied
greg knowing all about liers working with them all day gave her a look of disbelife and said
"right gorgeous, im off to the gym, you be a good girl and dont get into any trouble, ok", claire nodded and greg left the house and drove into town. Claire, seeing her chance smartened herself up a bit and headed out of the house with aaron and onto the bus to get to the walaby pub.

Claire arived at the pub five minutes late, she rushed into the pub and looked around for kate, she couldnt see her so was just about to leave when a figure came up behind her and tapped her on the shoulder.
"Claire?" the women asks
"yes, who are..." claire starts until finallyu realising that it was kate. kate had changed alot, she now had blond hair, wore sun glasses and had a totaly different fashion sence.
"Kate why have you...." claire starts
"i've brought you here because, i wanted to see you." kate explained
What, so you did all this to see me?" claire asked
"yes, these days i carnt be too carful" kate answered
"why?" claire asks, kate pulls out 2 wanted posters.
"this one is all over america" kate says pointing to the poster in her left hand, "and this one is just in sydney" kate says pointing to the poster in her right hand,
"thats bad" claire ays
"i know, now im definatley going to get caught" kate says
"no, not that, the reward is higher in australia than it is in america." claire says, kate tuts and smiles. sudenly greg burstes into the pub and looks straight at the table that claire and kate are sat.
"hi, claire, kate" he says, claire and kate both gobsmacked say
"how did you know it is kate"
"come on girls, i never forget a pritty face." greg says smiling,
"you carnt turn her in to the cops greg, she's my friend" claire pleeds, greg gives her a smile and says,
"for what you girls have gone through on that island they should give you medals, and anyway, i would never hand in my favourite criminal"
Kate and claire both smile at him and they all get a beer to celabrate.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Catch a falling star chapter 4 part 1 of 4:

Claire was in a very large bed next to greg. she couldnt help thinking about the island and had to ask greg one question,
"how did you get me off that island?" claire asks,
"its a very long story" greg answers
"well you'd better start it now then" claire says,
greg smiles and starts to tell the story.

&flash back in gregs office&

greg was in his office fileing a report on a criminal he caught,
"now i see why you just kill them" gregs left tenant paul joked as he put his report in the cabinet. greg didnt answer which worried paul, "whats wrong greg, your usally very lively at this time." paul asked
"its claire, its been 2 months since that plane left for america and she's not back yet" greg answered
"ow ye, she's putting her baby up for adoption, she would have to stay there until it was born then wouldnt she" paul explained
"ye but 2 months, she was 8 months pregnant when she left, she was sopost to have it a month ago but the thing that worries me the most is that she hasnt phoned me once" greg woories just grew every time he mentioned her, he had to do something.

Later that day, greg went to visite the ocianic airport for some confort but it would only make thing alot worse.
"excuse me miss?" greg asked a young women behind one of the ticket desks,
"yes" the women answered
"do you know if flight 815 has come back yet? greg asked
"sorry but flight 815 hasnt arived back here" she answered
"ok, do you know if it has arived in los angerles airport" greg asked hoping that the answer wouldnt be no, the women checked the computer and said puzzeled
"oh, er, sorry sir but flight 815 hasnt arived there ether", gregs heart sank as the worst had hit him hard. He cleared his head and said
"well where the bloody hell is that plane?", the women shrugged and called the manager. Not suprising the ocianic airlines was owned by the Dharma corperation. greg knew the corperation preveously, he arested 5 scientists for ilegal experiments on animals and humans and Dharma was sued a total of 3 million. Greg knew that if he wanted answers he would have to go to the top. He flew all the way to america just to have "a word" with the head of the dharma coperation Mr Paik.
to cut a long story short he held a gun to mr Paiks head until he gave him a map of the where abouts of the island. what mr paik didnt tell greg was that the island was where the Dharma did all there ilegal experiments. Greg involved the army with the help of one of his old friends general daniel tunnercliff, and they set off to the island with 5 rescue helicopters and 20 rescue boats.

"wow you did all that for me?" claire asked greg when he finished the story
"yes claire, i couldnt bare life without you, i even started to get depressed and had to take pills, i stoppped eating and drinking until you returned into my arms." greg answered very pationatly. Claire was more inlove with him now that she showed her love very clearly.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Catch a falling star chapter 4 part 2 of 4:

Greg opened the door to his house and walked in,
"claire, im home, claire!" greg shouted but got no answer, greg sereached every room but claire was no where to be found. He found aaron and the nanny in the nursary, " wheres claire?" greg asked
"she left half an hour ago, she said she had some buissness to atend to" the nanny answered, greg knew that wasnt good and was about to head out of the door when he got a call from the police staiton,
"greg its carol, you are needed at a disturbence at 52 heloway drive." his secutary says. greg thought for a minute and then realised where claire had gone. he jumped into his car and sped off to fine claire before someone else did.

Greg arived at 52 heloway drive to hear screams that were very familiar. he ran th the house and kicked the door down to find claire with a knife in her hand and a scared Richard Malkin in a corner.
"do you realise what you have done you, freak!" claire shouts
"claire! what are you doing?" greg asked as carmly as he could
"teaching this son of a B**ch a leasson" claire answers
"claire this isnt the way to do things" greg says trying to carm her down
"you dont know what trouble he caused, he sent me to the flaming island, he deserves to be killed!" claire explained
"i know he did claire but not this way" greg said stepping closer to claire. Claire points the knife towards greg but he carries on walking. "what you going to stab me claire?" greg asked her, claire looked at the floor ashamed that she pointed the knife at greg and turns it back to richard, greg gets behind claire so that he could touch her back. she turns around and says "why are you doing this greg, you know what he did to me, so why are you protecting him?"
"im not protecting him claire, im protecting you, there are 2 cops comeing here right now, if they catch you with a knife and him on the floor like this you will be arested, and i dont want to loose you again, not after the island, so come on claire, give me the knife and i promise you wont go to jail." greg explained
"can you promise me that he wont get away, that this day will scare him for the rest of his life, that every time my name is mentioned he will say he's sorry to me for doing that to me, can you promise that?" claire asks
"i promise" greg answers. claire hands him the knife and hugs greg. Richard gets up and walks past greg, greg grabs richards shoulder and throws him to the wall.
"what are you doing?" richard asks
"forfilling a promise" greg says punching richard. Richard pleeds for greg to stop but greg gave him a punch for every day that claire spent on the island, then greg got claires neckles that had her name on it heated it in a lighter flame, got richards arm and put the very hot necklace on his skin. richard screamed in pain but greg held it in place until it made a scare of her name. he then pined richard to the wall and said
"you tell anyone that me or claire visited you and i will tell the police what you did to claire, how you sent her to the island using your phycic ability and have you locked up, do you understand?" greg asks, Richard didnt answer so greg therw him into the table, "i said do you understand?". richard nodded and greg let him go. Greg and claire walked out of the house and got into the car as the police arived, "false alarm boys, the guys a nutter" greg said to the officers,
"i thought it might be, this is where that phsyco Richard lives that thinks he can see into the future, we could arest him for waisting police time." a officer said,
"dont bother, he's got a knife and nearly got me with it, i'd hate to see someone get injered" greg lied
"ok, oh by the way, why is claire with you?" the other officer said
"i got the call as i was picking her up and we wernt far from this street." greg explained
"ok, see you later." the officers said
"ye i'll see you boys." greg said back driving back to his house.

when they got back greg said to claire,
"you need a class in anger managment, you went crazy"
"i got that off you, i spend way too much time with you." claire said
"dont say that, i'll teach you how to control your anger if you want?" greg offered
"what like you!" claire joked, so they both went inside for an early night .

the end.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

thats all of them, except for my created episodes but there a bit too long, i'll post a link to them but i cannot be arsed copying and pasting them on here

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Absolutely amazing!!!
That was beautiful!!!

10/10

no way!!!, you read all that in the space of about a few minutes, you ether missed bits out (which is hard because its so good) or you are an increadibly fast reader (most likly verdict)

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

No I read it all!
I am a fast reader!!!

I really enjoyed it!!!

thanks, my stories are better but i will post them another time, im trying to involve greg in the lost episodes, so far ive put him in

poilet 1
walkabout
the whole truth
lockedown

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Cool!

In your fanfic, does Greg have a connection to Locke by any chance??? Question

no, he has connections with Kate, sawyer and claire, he lives in sydney australia as a very susesful cop, he is friends with claire and is connected to kate and sawyer because of his job.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

cool!

i think its time i posted my created episodes now, go to the created lost episodes to view them.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

I'll read them later!
I hope they are as good as the Claire series!!!

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thanks there is more remade episodes on created lost episodes.

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Looking forward to them. Very Happy

there all on the created lost episodes, thing

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"Take what you can and give nothing back!"
"Trust is the hardest thing to gain, yet the easiest thing to loose,"

Doh, sorry, totally missed that thread *hitting self on head*. I'll check em out now. Very Happy